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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Evil Slipper Kid
« on: August 13, 2009, 02:00:36 am »
Your arm is alright, depending on if he's supposed to be muscular or not. :D

And the metal slippers, I'm not sure...But your method of making the shirt and slippers just makes it look metal.
Perhaps...Just don't shade quite like that..? :crazy:

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Evil Slipper Kid
« on: August 13, 2009, 01:53:44 am »
His head is way too small! :wah:

That's just about the only thing I see to crit.

Except, maybe that...His slippers looks kinda like metal.

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Pixel Art / Re: D~Dawg's pixels
« on: August 13, 2009, 01:45:59 am »
Even the CommanderD ones?

Darn you!  :mean: How'd you know it was me?

Seeing all of these, all I can say is, go back to your basics. Start working with paper and pencil and try getting better at your basic art skills. The way you shade right now, you'll never end up with something satisfactory volume-wise. You need the basics really.

I suggest drawing from life, or something e-based, like posemaniacs' 30 second drawings method

Shading, shading, shading... I'll work on it. >>notice how I didn't get mad this time! ;D<<
And you're probably thinking I'm ignoring what you said about pencil and paper, but I'm not.

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Pixel Art / Re: D~Dawg's pixels
« on: August 12, 2009, 06:20:55 pm »
I know'd I'd be asking for alot, but can one of you mods combine all my threads into one post?

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Pixel Art / Re: D~Dawg's pixels
« on: August 12, 2009, 04:34:18 pm »
Hi, Dyble! ;D

Yeah, I added a little too much detail on the nose and it made it look huge. :lol:

oh, and scracth what I said about it being my avatar. The swrod SHALL be my avatar

//edit ptoing: stop making so many threads if you have lots of wip stuff going.

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Pixel Art / Re: D~Dawg's pixels
« on: August 12, 2009, 04:31:49 pm »

what I did:
changed the shading
fixed the eyes
removed shading on back leg

 :hehe:

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Pixel Art / Re: D~Dawg's pixels
« on: August 12, 2009, 04:27:45 pm »
Here's a sword:

So, I wanted some AA-lineart practice, and I started making a lightsaber. But as soon as I made the handle for it, I turned it into a sword.
This is my first lineart, and it looks pretty decent to me. :P

I was gonna stick this in the lineart thread, but I thought it wasn't worth it.



I think the shadow should actually resemble the sword... :lol: heheh.
 

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] friendly blobby monster, help!
« on: August 11, 2009, 11:46:53 pm »
Here:

Is that is chin?

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] friendly blobby monster, help!
« on: August 11, 2009, 11:40:35 pm »
One thing I see that totally makes it look bad, is the hump in the shading under his mouth.

Aslo, the black, thick outlines. Just make it a slightly darker color than his main parts, and it'll look better.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] an Old King
« on: August 11, 2009, 05:26:47 pm »
How does the torso look now?

BETTER! ;D But now it "slightly" looks like metal... :(

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