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Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Gold Mining Town
« on: July 15, 2013, 06:08:16 pm »
Wow! That's an awesome edit. I've been staring at my version for so long it just looked right to me, but now I see see how washed out it is  :-[

Here's what I've come up with:

- Gave the piece more more depth and saturation la the edit.
- Made the tree bigger

Question: is the mountain too detailed the way I have it now? In some refs I've looked at, mountains are very detailed even at a distance, but others not so much.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] 3/4 Top Down View Sprites
« on: July 14, 2013, 09:01:17 pm »
The prototype looks pretty good  :y:

The way each frame is timed adds a feeling of weight to the character. Though, on the side view animations, I wonder if the legs goes too far back? 

Pixel Art / Re: UUUUP!
« on: July 14, 2013, 08:57:01 pm »
Some crits:

The right side of his right leg and hip-area needs more contrast (i.e. darker).
The edge of the right side of his coat (the edge that is nearest to his belt) should be highlighted.

Overall, you should study the reference for how light and dark wraps around each 'form'. I see that your lines stays pretty true to the ref, but the 3d forms in your image do not.

Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Gold Mining Town
« on: July 14, 2013, 08:28:33 pm »

Going to try to make my character design not so boring.

Next update: finish tree, mountain, clouds, and sky .

Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Gold Mining Town
« on: July 11, 2013, 08:33:12 am »
I saw these clouds as I was hiking today and stared at them for a couple of hours. 

Next update: finish building and tree.

Pixel Art Feature Chest / GR#131 - Gold Mining Town - Sideview
« on: July 11, 2013, 05:05:28 am »

Art for a game concept I'm working on. Will update as I go.

1x for edits:

Pixel Art / Horned
« on: April 10, 2012, 01:25:48 am »
Just looking for some crits before I clean and color.

Pixel Art / Re: 8-Bit Zombie Action Game
« on: October 02, 2011, 06:35:13 am »
I don't think it blends better: it goes from yellow > red > black > red. Physically, it doesn't really make much sense either.

Pixel Art / Re: 8-Bit Zombie Action Game
« on: September 30, 2011, 09:51:37 pm »
Cool explosion and fonts!

About the turning: when he switches between front and left views, it looks like he is only turning his torso (though it seems to be an illusion.) Maybe emphasize his left foot turn?

Pixel Art / Re: 8-Bit Zombie Action Game
« on: September 30, 2011, 08:28:04 am »
His midsection is a little blurry (the 2px line defining his abs is causing banding).
Small edit:

I still think the biceps are too small. And he looks even more like a Gorilla now than before
I disagree.

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