What is this with the file type?  It's a png.  If it's changed it was tinypic.  And from I can see there is no image quality loss.  I explained all this earlier in the thread.

You guys are great.  I love both edits.  You gave me a lot to think about.  I'll work on a better pose...or maybe a few just for practice.  I want to make it interesting and my version wasn't doing that.

And EyeCraft...why pants?   

I think at first I was going for a cartoony, amazon warrior, rednecks daughter who's just a bit trigger happy.  I think Jad's edit more conveys this as EyeCraft's edit looks more like a tag along chick who only fired a gun once or twice.  lol  But definately is more correct and believable.

I'm no expert by any means, but I think the light source is all over the place.  The part above and to the left of the door is coming from one direction and the thing on the left side of the screen looks like it's coming from the opposite direction...sort of matching the light source on the clouds.  Maybe create some shadows on the ground too.  It would probably add some more depth.

I'm sure others would have some better advice.   

Ok. I fixed the basic proportions of the top half and bottom half according to:  http://www.idrawdigital.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/01/prop_female.gif
Does this look better?

I do miss the longer legs though.  I suppose I could make the heels higher.   

First off thanks for everyones replies. 

I guess I'll just work on anatomy first.  I figured out the the neck was too short.  I do that a lot.  I also fattened up the arms a little.  Probably needs a bit more...such as her left elbow over the gunstock somewhat.
Do the legs still look to long now with these changes?  Keeping in mind the skirt is really short.

@Jorund, I did not change the file extension.  Tinypic did.  I see no quality loss as far as I can tell.