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Pixel Art / Re: Rabbit Laser Beam [WIP]
« on: November 14, 2010, 03:17:45 am »
I agree with all Tourist said, including about the edit.

Further edit:


Probably way to noisy especially for animation, but fixed the eye a little more.  Seems to look better a little smaller.  I don't know.  You be the judge.  Just throwing ideas at you.  Kind of looks like a cat with long ears now.  Sorry about that..  lol  :)


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Pixel Art / Re: Rabbit Laser Beam [WIP]
« on: November 14, 2010, 02:01:12 am »
Nice.  I like your idea.

Here's an edit:

I would say more a believable eye was the biggest issue.  I looked very separate from the bunny.  I tried to define a head to find a better placement for the eye as far as location(lowered a bit), and shading it as where it would fit best in its eye socket. And I was more aggressive with the shading over all to pull it together as a whole.  Anyway hope it gives you some ideas.   

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Pixel Art / Re: Fable Hobbe (WIP) Working Again
« on: October 29, 2010, 02:27:38 am »
Very cool.  How about more dramatic shading?

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Pixel Art / Re: Portrait
« on: October 16, 2010, 06:01:01 am »
Its' really hard to determine a light source.  I'd go for more contrast on the face with a more definitive shadows after determining a light source.  If nothing else shade the eye sockets and around the nose and neck. Don't be afraid of a more contrasting color.

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Pixel Art / Re: Customizable Sprite Bases!
« on: October 11, 2010, 10:12:25 pm »
These make some nice sprites.  But with the amount of variations you could possibly have, it would be a lot easier to render a character with a piece of software.  I used to do stuff like this.  More with iso stuff rather than sprites, such as roads, trees and buildings. 
What are your ultimate plans for this?

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Pixel Art / Re: Anatomy help
« on: October 10, 2010, 11:40:21 pm »
It seems like it's off balance(the top compared to the bottom).  The face looks too small and the legs look too fat(especially her left one).  The center looks great though.
I think the eye and crotch were too high as well.   
A quick edit...

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Pixel Art / Re: Angel (WIP) Need Help
« on: October 06, 2010, 11:39:23 pm »
The hair seems too stiff on the forehead for some reason.  It might work if the head looked like it was tilting to the side a bit more (see my edit above).  I wouldn't dither the face either(or at least that much).  That's just personal taste tho. 
The feet should be easy since the hands came out nice.  ???

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Pixel Art / Re: Angel (WIP) Need Help
« on: October 05, 2010, 10:49:10 pm »
You're doing a great job.  I'm surprised you need help with the face and feet.  Anyway, I like small detailed stuff so here's a quick face edit for an idea...


Can't wait to see more progress.

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Pixel Art / Re: Link
« on: July 22, 2010, 01:32:48 am »
I didn't think the original pose was off that much....I looked at it as he was ready to strike with the blade.  Which would be correct with the extended leg to create a balance when the blade was swung forward. 

Manjaman's edit looks correct too if the blade has already started it's motion.

I agree with WM about the light source.  Maybe just the lightest color on the pants should be used just as highlights on the knees?

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Pixel Art / Re: Link
« on: July 21, 2010, 10:04:25 pm »
Quote from: adcrusher524 on July 21, 2010, 09:55:08 pm
thanks for the edit dpixel! is this enough of his face showing? or should his head be turned more.
Yes.  That's much better.  It was a bit hard to read before.

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