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Pixel Art / Re: Architecture Help
« on: December 11, 2008, 07:51:58 pm »
I know this isn't really related to the architecture of the piece, but.. It looks like the grass and cement were made with a spraypaint tool, or similar means of randomly dispersing pixels. It doesn't really help it to look textured, just kinda messy.

I don't think you need to make it smaller necessarily, but I am curious as well as to why the scale is so large. And even a little more attention to detail would go a long way.

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Pixel Art / Re: This was fun to make
« on: December 10, 2008, 07:28:32 pm »
Cool character! Though, I can't really tell; is his hair two colors, or is he wearing a bandana?

As far as technique goes, everything looks pretty great, except for the spinning motion right before the downward slash. I somehow feel like the power of the motion is diminished. Perhaps it doesn't look weighty enough?

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Pixel Art / Re: My shuttle revisited
« on: December 04, 2008, 12:50:08 am »
I second everything Conceit just said! The first one is the best version in my opinion, it feels more.. innocent, maybe? The other two look kinda grungy to me. Not that grungy is a bad thing! But if that's what you're going for, the toy-like qualities of it don't work for it. I say stick to the style of the first one.

Oh, one last thing: I'm not sure why, but the lighter blue on the slanted edges (at the front and on the fin) are bothering me. I'd suggest swapping with a lighter purple.

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Pixel Art / Re: Alvizaar Rises
« on: November 30, 2008, 08:33:28 pm »
It seems to me that the highlights on his head and back are a little too white, and could be toned down a bit. Also, his elbow looks a little out of place to me. It's a bit pointy and sharp compared to the rest of his body.

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