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Messages - JosephSeraph
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Pixel Art / Re: D~Dawg's pixels
« on: August 10, 2009, 06:31:37 pm »
I go aganist using black for anything except outlines. Even worse when it's true black [0,0,0]. i use [32,32,32]  for outlines, only :/

Also, i recommend changing more the hue between the shades, and making them more variant on the light source. Also, i recommend starting fresh and new, and showing us the outline, because there are some things strange... Odd. Like the eliptical shape based eyes.

That'a what i think...

Pixel Art / Re: The Deep
« on: July 31, 2009, 08:54:54 pm »
Definately the darkly mooded version is better. I think dark backgrounds always make pixelArt look better. Funny, i am completely clueless about the reason of it.

Pixel Art / Re: 4 random characters, C+C
« on: July 29, 2009, 07:51:38 pm »
I think it would be a nice idea to use less saturated colours (search for premade palettes, if you wish.)
also, more difference within the shades, and an outside lin e, would look nice. I guess.. =S

Pixel Art / Re: Star Maker
« on: July 29, 2009, 02:12:27 pm »
Or teh dithering will look awful, and unavailable... =/
At first I thought it was about that old SNES game, Princess Star Maker xD Anyways, i find the hair quite odd and.. Unhair-like. That's all i can say, but remember to put up the shadow background. I am really liking this, these themes are always my favorites.

Pixel Art / Re: Eye Chicken
« on: July 29, 2009, 02:07:58 pm »
You could divide the chicken legs better, it is quite hard to percieve there are two different objects, they seem connected. Also, i think using grey for living things is bad, so I would add a pit purple-ish shade on the darkest shade of the eye, and a bit yellow-ish shade on the lighter shade of the eye. That's up to you, tough. Nice idea, i like it ^-^

Pixel Art / Re: Trying to improve
« on: July 29, 2009, 02:03:36 pm »
Firstly, i think you use too many shades. Wrongly. Try to use only three or four shades per colour, at least =/

  p."Hello world."
Or better, hello people. My name is José Victon, i am 14 years old, and aspiring of pixel artist. I am an apprentice tattooist too, and a fan ov EVERY mahou shoujo manga and anime lol >.<
Generally kind, sometimes annoying, my personaklity is INFP~The dreamer/Healer. I have a DeviantArt account, and a PixelJoint account, both with the name of "JosephSeraph"
Well... That's me, i guess.

Pixel Art / Re: Faris .. ( mockup's objects )
« on: July 24, 2009, 10:09:05 pm »
You made me cry :'-C I thought it was FFV's Faris.
In the Breath animation... Move the rest of the body, 1 px up, then 1 px down =/
It really looks awkward.... I really like these sprites, tough. I think you could ad some light difference in the tones (do NOT SATURATE, these sprites are so sweetm, like they are)
Anyways, i am loving it ^-^

Pixel Art / Platformer doodles - JosephSeraph
« on: July 24, 2009, 10:05:23 pm »
  I always sucked in making Platformer Sprites. Now i saw some awesome sprites, studied them and... Tcharam!

Update today #2:

I will update everyday... Crit, please?

I know the moon quite looks like... A gigant lemon.. But i never made the Moon at all. ._. Oh.. I will get a ref and fix it. Not now. The new walkway is supposed to be srteet floor (paralelepipedo?) but it kind of looks like a Roof. Any ideas on how to change that? =/

Portfolios / Re: JosephSeraph´s Sprite Album!
« on: July 24, 2009, 08:41:42 pm »
The ultimate shame shall die. Yup. lots of updates. More to come. Sorry for the stupidness, guys >.o

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