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2D & 3D / Re: Castle rooms sketches : i need your help
« on: December 09, 2012, 11:55:11 am »
First: Some people are lazy here and don't click thorugh blank links. So it's best to make your images visible first thing by using the image tag:  "" Then, in between the two imgs insert your image location. You would go:

img http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2012/49/1354977442-testjose004.png /img

And just add the brackets.

Second: As for inspiration. Have you seen the 'Second Quest' comic on kickstarter? Also DoubleFine's 'Hack 'N Slash' might be good as well. But I'm not sure how public those forums are. Also, check out Orioto on deviantArt. He does fantastic video game stuff in general and a few Zelda pieces.

Otherwise. They look neat to me.

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General Discussion / Re: Official Off-Topic Thread
« on: December 08, 2012, 11:12:20 pm »
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sounds like I'd better stay away from 'dem beers when I turn 21

Probably one of the wisest decisions you'll make in your life.

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General Discussion / Re: Official Off-Topic Thread
« on: December 08, 2012, 07:15:16 am »
Hm. Anyone bored/have time/want to do something free for a ludum dare game?

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2D & 3D / Re: Mini-Comic (Traditional art: constructive criticism appreciated)
« on: December 06, 2012, 02:46:45 am »
Thanks Ashbad! I sent you a note on deviantArt!

I have also edited the main post a bit. So hopefully things are a little clearer. But the entire comic is 16 pages long. I didn't want to post the whole thing on here cause that would take forever to load. I've included a link to the comic's deviantArt gallery folder and again in a post below. I'll also put it here:

http://xhunterko.deviantart.com/gallery/40443277

I know I shoulda done that first though. That was my bad, sorry. But anyways, great critiques so far everyone!

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2D & 3D / Re: Mini-Comic (Traditional art: constructive criticism appreciated)
« on: December 05, 2012, 08:49:55 am »
Good points all around Ashbad. Thank you! But do you think you could explain a bit more about how you think the story faulters? It's fine if you don't want to though.

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2D & 3D / Re: Mini-Comic (Traditional art: constructive criticism appreciated)
« on: December 04, 2012, 10:13:13 pm »
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send it around for some crit

And then there's the problem of no one wanting or having time to read it. :( What do you do in situations like that? But yeah, good points all around.

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2D & 3D / Re: Mini-Comic (Traditional art: constructive criticism appreciated)
« on: December 04, 2012, 09:43:36 am »
Quote from: rikfuzz on December 04, 2012, 09:30:02 am
You have a day job?  Out of interest how old are you?  :-X  There are some very basics you should should really be taking care of before seeking people's feedback, imho.  (If you're not taking any care to even try planning, spell-checking, inking, lettering*, etc I don't believe you're serious about the whole thing to be honest).  If you're serious, I'd try a forum that specialises in comics and is beginner friendly.

http://www.sweatdrop.com/forum is beginner friendly, although based around Japanese style comics, but there's obviously a lot of overlap, especially in the basics. 

(*okay a little bit)

Had a day job. So I wasn't sure how much time I could spend on it. So yeah, like I said earlier, very very rushed. I hadn't seen that forum before, so I'll probably check it out. Thanks!
(if you are curious about my age, you may click my indieDb button and then click my profile name there to see a short about summary of me. :))

So I don't seem rude:

"If you could ink it it would look great!"

I thought so too. And then I thought, I am never going to get this done before the end of this year if I do. Thanks!

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2D & 3D / Re: Mini-Comic (Traditional art: constructive criticism appreciated)
« on: December 04, 2012, 08:59:38 am »
@NaCl Thank you! Yeah, it was very rushed. Even though it was done over the course of a few months, I'd pick it up, then drop it again to work on a game. The problem was I had a day job and could only allocate how much time I could spend on what. And I really wanted to get a graphic novel done this year. So yeah. I thought I had had enough story though. Where would you have done different?

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2D & 3D / Re: Mini-Comic (Traditional art: constructive criticism appreciated)
« on: December 04, 2012, 03:59:23 am »
Yeah there's a few spelling errors here or there. I should have included a link to the rest of the comic in it's entirety. I'll do that here:

http://xhunterko.deviantart.com/gallery/40443277

There's 16 pages so I didn't want to post the whole thing on this thread.

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2D & 3D / Mini-Comic (Traditional art: constructive criticism appreciated)
« on: December 04, 2012, 01:36:23 am »
Hey guys!

I did my first mini-comic this year. I've shown it to a few friends and family and have put it on the internet. While I've already gotten some feed back on an issue, I didn't get much on the comic itself. You guys are by far, the most brutally honest critics I know. So, I was wondering what your guy's take on my comic would be. Here's a couple links:

Title:

Sample beginning panels:

Sample middle panels:

2 panels before the end:


The full comic can be viewed here:
http://xhunterko.deviantart.com/gallery/40443277

So um. What could be improved here?

Thanks in advanced!

EDIT: I have included the link to the full comic through the deviantArt link. The whole comic is 16 pages. Hopefully that explains some story gaps.

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