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Messages - Raytheon
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Pixel Art / Re: Terra Tactics Online
« on: October 29, 2008, 09:50:17 am »
In the latest one his right leg (our left) seems to be broken and disproportionate after you changed the angle of his upper body. The shading and pose is great, but its the perspective that needs a little work.


I'd give it an edit but id either screw it up or make myself look like an idiot. Plus its late.

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Pixel Art / Re: 4 frame walk cycle wip
« on: October 27, 2008, 06:57:34 am »
head looks at a different angle, too big and/or not on the right position on the neck

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Arceus the Lord (updated)
« on: October 27, 2008, 06:55:39 am »
dont constrict yourself to those lines make bits of fur stick out in places

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General Discussion / Re: Learn how to create your own mobile phone game
« on: October 26, 2008, 05:09:08 am »
i'm all for it


i'd love to try

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Pixel Art / Re: Odeka: Mockup
« on: October 26, 2008, 04:40:45 am »
skamocore's edit's colours seem to be alot nicer, i cant stop looking at it

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Pixel Art / Re: New character, The thief
« on: October 25, 2008, 08:17:51 pm »
Ok, ill start from the top.
the anatomyis out of place, and doesnt make sense, the lineart messy, but the proportions are decent, so you dont need to fix that.
the colours are decent, though the skin colours could use some mroe contrast,and you could probably reduce it down to 3. the shading lines need smoothing, just like the lineart lines. if you have the lightsource from behind him, you would see barely any light on the shirt or arms, certainly no highlights. its coming along nicely though

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Alien-Bird
« on: October 25, 2008, 08:11:03 pm »
i'm hatin' the hills but lovin' the bird

the hills just look bland and boring compared to the rest of the piece but i really love the detail of the bird, the clouds, and how you fixed the mouth (though i think it'd look better if they were a bit more broken)

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Pixel Art / Re: WIP guy with hammer
« on: October 25, 2008, 08:08:16 pm »
much better, but the walking or thumping looks odd

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Pixel Art / Re: WIP guy with hammer
« on: October 19, 2008, 06:06:47 am »
the thighs should be thicker than the lower leg, the legs should be slightly longer and in a more practical pose (be able to move into other poses not looking like hes trying to look cool), and the pose should be more natural. the body in general should be a bit wider, but the colours and shading have greatly improved

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General Discussion / Re: Pixel Art Show
« on: October 17, 2008, 08:34:21 pm »
looks like it went really well, great to see

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