I didn't say it was finished, xD. Well i'm working on moving his belly, thanks for the critics, i feel that you make me work to progress and that's good xD.

Maybe on Tuesday i can finish it or in a 80%.

Thanks.

Ups, i totally for got to close his hands, wll i'm working on the left leg.

I didn't like the idea of head rotation, but it looks good, i'm thinking of adding up-down movement.

Hey, theres walking animation worst than mine! lol. Souly, I appreciate that you post in my threads ^^.
Does it mean you have interest in the main character & other characters?

I´m going to move his belly.

Thanks for the critics.

So long since i didn't edit it, i was making my comics and some other things for the game.

So here's an update, hope you like it.



Have to edit, i like how it looks on this forum, believe it.

Well, i watched your fairy and i felt that it was my oportunity to draw a woman body.

I didn't edited it completely i would take me too much time xD.

First, you have a nice lineart, but before coloring it you should modify the curved lines for not to look jaggy.

Here is it, (hair and wings were done without thinking xD).



- Gerard

The new one has TONS of it.  The problem lies in the way you layer many low-contrast shades over each other.  The shape of a shade should not run completely parallel to another one. Try making the alien with only 3 shades of green and 2 two of red, then I hope you'll see what I mean.

I agree with him. You pillow shade because of you don't know how to shade correctly. Try seeking a tutorial.
You should try to modify your lineart, aliens don't have a flat head, i modify it.


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