There will be highlights, and I think I'm turning this creature in a ice-elemental, and later I'll be drawing a fire-elemental, also ghostlike. It's Art for my online game 
I was carefull with the shading on the belly, cuz I don't want to pillow-shade again XD

Just a little thing to practice losing pillow-shading, and just having some fun.
I'm going to update it everytime, so don't say things like add another shading color, because I will. Those edits of u will be not usefull, unless it's about editing this shadow layer.
So, is there any pillow shading, and are there some points where more shadow could be added, to make it more ghostlike?

I think I should make the edges of the tail somewhat rounder, right

No, I'm not making the ghost transparant.

Thank you

Nice edits you guys, I like those eyes, they look both friendly yet dangerous. The anatomy ( male/female problems ) is the reason I made a girl, I used to practice on males, but then I decided to do a girl for fun. Also making breasts gives an extra practice on shading.

You didn't scare me away. I live in the Netherlands, I sleep when u are awake 

What do you guys mean with "package"? Muscles? Or her personal space? 

That's my problem. I don't know what it means exactly..

But I thought it ment like shading all around the object, so the dark shade is everywhere, not like right much shading and left none/a little. "not like right much shading and left none/a little" is good, I thought..

But can anyone help?

Most of the critics I get is about pillow-shading. I'm currently trying to remove the pillow-shading from my drawings. I started out on a simple sphere, with 2 light sources.



Is the pillow-shading gone? Or is it still there? What should I change? ( It's not about if it's a beautiful piece, it's about the shading )

If it's almost good now I'll perfect it ( try to ).

Greets.