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Pixel Art / Re: Crazy Cat [WIP]
« on: July 31, 2009, 12:50:56 am »
I agree, the dithering isn't working for this peice. It looked better before you added it.

I suggest you make a full cat head like Snowsoft edit showed because right now it's hard to tell what the animal is. To me, the teeth don't look like they are part of the face. I'm not sure how to fix that though  :( Maybe someone else knows.

For the ears, I think looking at a reference should help you out with that.

(I may be wrong on some of this)

Good luck!


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Pixel Art / Re: Simply Improving (WIPs)
« on: July 29, 2009, 10:13:19 pm »
I'm not sure why it didn't download. I downloaded it from here http://www.humanbalance.net/gale/us/download.html

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Pixel Art / Re: Simply Improving (WIPs)
« on: July 28, 2009, 05:22:33 pm »
I'm  not too good, but i thought i found some things u could improve. First, the cat doesn't seem to have ears. It has the pointy thing on its head though. put some pink in there to show that it's the cats ears. The red stuff in the cats eyes are kind of confusing. make them 1 pixel thick and i think that will help it. The teeth are really hard to read. At first i thought it was a collar of some sort. I would put some outlines on them. I think you should give the cats neck back because it looks like a floating head to me. Also,  some of the dark shades aren't dark enough and the light shades aren't bright enough. Make the darks darker and some of the brights brighter. When you shade dark, shift the hue just a little bit to a colder color like blue or purple. When you add highlights, shift the hue a little bit to a warm color like orange or yellow.


P.S. I would reccomend you use Graphics gale. It's really simple and easy to use.



And my terrible edit:

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2D & 3D / Re: Official OT-Creativity Thread 2
« on: July 18, 2009, 07:19:33 pm »
Wait what??? you did that with markers!!?? is that even possible? :-\

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Pixel Art / Re: Robot mockup
« on: July 14, 2009, 08:39:21 pm »


Theres my new robot. I kind of based him off of a bee and that drill type thing on the end is supposed to be a stinger. The gun arm has alot of problems with it, but i couldnt get the right shape for the gun thing. Please C&C  :)

P.S. Does anyone know if you can copy all layers onto the next frame in graphics gale?? i dont know if i worded that right. thanks

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Pixel Art / Re: Robot mockup
« on: July 13, 2009, 04:20:13 pm »
Thanks for the critique guys! It seems like The left guy has A LOT of problems so im going to redo him.  So i made  the screen smaller, and organized the HUD. I added dithering to the claw robot and i think it works for him. The two gray ovals at the top of the screen are the win/lose markers. When you win, i guess it would light up green or red or something. I haven't come up with any names yet so i just added "Name." Soon I'll have the new robot done. Thanks :P!!
 

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Pixel Art / Re: Robot mockup
« on: July 12, 2009, 08:05:25 pm »
Alright I've been working on this all day, and i think im making pretty good progress.The left robot's shoulder pad was supposed to be really big. I don't know if it looks right though but i like it so i dont think im going to change it. I think i fixed the building on the left too. Also, i centered the 3 and the 2:00 thing, I tried to "spice" the HUD up but it still looks pretty boring. I gave depth to the rocks and the claws on the one robot. The robots torso is fixed i think but not completely sure. I changed the shading some on both robots too. Regulus Awesome, I took the tutorial on AA but i still don't get it. I tried to use it with this piece but it didn't work. I'm still not exactly sure how to AA. Please critique more, it helps  :D

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Pixel Art / Re: Robot mockup
« on: July 12, 2009, 03:23:10 am »
Thanks guys!!!! I'll try to work on it more asap!!

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Pixel Art / Robot mockup
« on: July 12, 2009, 12:02:17 am »
       Lately, i've been working on a robot mockup, and i need a little help with it. It is supposed to be a fighter game, and the 3 in the middle is the timer i guess. I may make this a game but i suck at programming. The guy on the left looks a little weird but im not sure whats wrong with him. Please  c&c (i dont know what that meens but other people say it so i guess i will too  ::) )



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Pixel Art / Re: Alien Animations [update 1]
« on: July 11, 2009, 03:35:15 pm »

   Great job on the alien he looks really cool! I have a few things that I think might improve him. On the head, you can barely see the highlights that are there. I would brighten that up so it doesn't look like the same color. Also, when you shade darker, shift the hue to a colder color like blue or purple. When you add highlights, shift the hue to a warmer color like orange or yellow. On the armor, it is completely gray. Gray is very boring so i would recommend that you add a tint of red on it.


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