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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] walknight
« on: September 21, 2009, 01:34:51 am »
His sword doesn't look very sharp, and also his hair could maybe use some highlights?  :-\  You  should add an almost white spot on his helmet and some other places on his armor

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Pixel Art / Re: Master Kame
« on: September 13, 2009, 11:23:34 pm »


I did a small edit on the shades. I hope it helps.

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Pixel Art / Re: {WIP} Grim reaper
« on: September 08, 2009, 09:55:34 pm »
I think he means that you're thinking of it as a 2D shape, not an actual object.  That's just what I thought he meant

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Pixel Art / Re: but its the pelvic thruuuuust
« on: September 02, 2009, 04:22:38 am »
is the guys left arm (our right) amputated or something? Because it kind of looks like it to me. It looks like a stump.

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Pixel Art / Re: First pixel
« on: August 29, 2009, 05:32:01 pm »
I did a quick edit :    

First of all, why do you have such a huge amount of space for a sprite that small? Anyways,  I think the swords could be thicker, right now they are pretty thin. Also the hilts(i think that's what they're called) on the sword needs to be longer. They are also too thin. Maybe you should brighten the colors, right now everything is kind of dark. I noticed he doesn't have any eyebrows, but that should be easy to fix. Instead of fully desaturated black on his hair and skirt thing, add a tint of red to them to make them more interesting.

Good luck!!!

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Pixel Art / Re: crit help deciding which character is better...
« on: August 29, 2009, 04:45:05 pm »
I think your character is too pale. Hes almost the same color as the scarf. Also, his belt is too high, maybe you should lower that a bit. His torso also needs to be longer?(Im not good with anatomy)

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Pixel Art / Re: Dying Animation help
« on: August 29, 2009, 01:35:14 am »
Maybe an arm or a leg could fall off fall off? That could be cool.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] FLAG
« on: August 10, 2009, 05:25:05 pm »
On the American flag, there are 7 red stripes and 6 white stripes. Yours only has 6 red and 5 white. Add 1 more white and red to it.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] an Old King
« on: August 10, 2009, 04:18:53 pm »
 I did a quick edit:

The farthest i could get the color count down to was 22. In yours, the eyes and the shade that sorrounds the left eye (his right) takes up 2 colors. If you make the eyes the same color as the darkest shade of the skin, that should take down a color. Also, in the mustache there is a color that you only used with 3 pixels. You can take that color out and it doesn't really make a difference. Also, Maybe add some backlighting (I think its called that) on the crown, and the robe.

I'm very bad at explaining things but i hope my edit helps.

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Pixel Art / Re: Crazy Cat [WIP]
« on: August 05, 2009, 01:49:02 am »
CommanderD,
    drawing with a pencil and paper doesn't seem like it would help you learn pixel art at all, but it does. A lot. I used to think "why would i draw on paper when i can do the same thing on my computer?" But my brother (he taught me alot of stuff) kept telling me pretty much the same thing people here are telling u, draw real things on paper. Use references. After i practiced drawing real things for a while, my pixel art became better.  If you learn to draw real things well, pixel art should come easier to you.

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