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Pixel Art / beat em' up character ANIMATED (Critique and feedback here)
« on: December 03, 2017, 06:29:25 am »
First of all, i'm not really sure if it is ok to start a new thread for something related to another piece, so if i shouldn't do this then sorry and please let me know :blind:

Anyway, whadabout this?


Does it look good? ok? even if you don't know what to say or can't precisely put your finger on what's wrong (if so), hearing a "good job" or "I donīt quite like it" will be fantastically helpful :) THANKS A LOT for the other feedback, this forum is fantastic :D

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Pixel Art / beat em' up character (Critique here)
« on: November 28, 2017, 05:15:19 am »
AND it's me again... I decided to make a more fictionalized sports game (i'm still thinking but everything points towards a combination of rugby and handball) my idea is to combine the sports genre with beat em' up

I decided to twist a little bit the artstyle so... is this good?



Tell me of any flaw you encounter or if the piece is garbage just as it is and should focus on another artstyle, the character is bald because it's hair is customizable so a different sprite must be made for each one, I also tried to make a height similar to the sprites of Scott Pilgrim vs the World and also tried the "black outline" that said sprites used, other than that I followed my intuition.

Thank you :)

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Pixel Art / [WIP] Human Figure
« on: November 11, 2017, 06:50:18 pm »
So, while making my shooter game, I also like to make pieces for other game ideas I have, just for the sake of practice.

So one of them is a soccer game (I will think of something creative later XD)

So, I made this for the "kit selection".


This is one of the first times I work on human figure and one of the biggest sprites I have made, the style is supossed to be "animesque", I know the right hand sucks, if you can tell me how can I improve it, or if I should totally dedicate myself to unrealistic stuff XD

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Pixel Art / New Artstyle,
« on: October 21, 2017, 05:57:54 pm »
Ok, I think i'm finally getting used to pixel art.

Recently I noticed that the game I was working on was painfully similar to Metal Slug, which was something bad, specially because of the release of Cuphead (which make our project look like Bubsy 3D compared to Mario 64).

I decided to throw away the metalic aesthetic and giving the game a more "biological" approach (aside from playing with gameplay mechanichs, but that goes in the Unity forums XD).

Anyway, here is my first result of the transition:



Let's talk about how original the character is latter, what I need right now is feedback on excecution, Thanks for your help :')


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General Discussion / About Posted Pixel-art Copyright
« on: July 09, 2017, 07:18:52 pm »
Well, I have a kind of important question

I'm making a game and have posted some pieces to get feedback, but our marketing guy told me to stop posting our stuff on the internet to prevent a potential design and art stealing.

I then wondered, is it unsafe to upload assets from our game on this forum to receive feedback? if so, what should I do to get criticism safely?

In case is not a problem to post our pixel art here, how can you assure me that? is there any policy or law on this forums that prevent stealing?

Thank you, also, I want to check the terms of agreement of this forum once more to make sure I didn't missed anything regarding this topic, THANKS!  ;D

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Pixel Art / [WIP][CC] Mechanic Giant Squirrel
« on: July 09, 2017, 01:05:15 am »
Ok! I also have this one, is a (kind of) WIP of a Boss from our game.



I'd REALLY appreciate feedback, I'm almost completely sure this one is lacking something (some friends of mine have said it looks "lifeless" and i really cannot tell why).

Thank you a lot!

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Pixel Art / [CC] I have a Tank, please take it down!
« on: July 08, 2017, 06:09:43 pm »
All right! I'm B-Rokal from Black Ice Cream Productions, a newly founded low budget game studio, and this is my first post here.

I'm making a pixel run and gun game that is going terrible, mainly because of the lack of feedback, so I decided to enter all the sprite art forums and galleries I could in order to get someone to point what i'm doing wrong and how I can fix it.

I REALLY don't want to mess up with this project :'( , don't be afraid to be rude if you have to, but I must know my weaknesses so the game won't suck stratospherically.



Here's some tank, an enemy and a background... go ahead and destroy them with criticism!  >:(

(that's all, I did my best in both the sprite and on making a post properly, i've read the FAQ and rules, if I missed something let me know).

Thank you!  ;D

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