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Hi!
Judging by the pose I understand that this is a throne, but I dont see it as a throne mostly because of the shading but if your intent is to remove it, I wont insist.
Regarding anatomy, (I'm no expert... really) I can spot many problems of proportion and shape:
- head pose seems weird, looks like the head is simply a ball put on the chest.
- bust is very triangular, seems exagerated.
- left and right forearms + right arm need muscles and curves, AFAICS your forearms seem to be elongated wrists.
- right shoulder is not shaded as a shoulder, the left one (even if it seems too huge), on the contrary, make me think it IS a shoulder.
- left legs is somewhat deformed; I dont really sense the calf nor the ankle.
Overall, I like this orangish copperish palette, also general contrast seem ok to me.
Judging by the pose I understand that this is a throne, but I dont see it as a throne mostly because of the shading but if your intent is to remove it, I wont insist.
Regarding anatomy, (I'm no expert... really) I can spot many problems of proportion and shape:
- head pose seems weird, looks like the head is simply a ball put on the chest.
- bust is very triangular, seems exagerated.
- left and right forearms + right arm need muscles and curves, AFAICS your forearms seem to be elongated wrists.
- right shoulder is not shaded as a shoulder, the left one (even if it seems too huge), on the contrary, make me think it IS a shoulder.
- left legs is somewhat deformed; I dont really sense the calf nor the ankle.
Overall, I like this orangish copperish palette, also general contrast seem ok to me.
), the pattern you've chosen attracts the eye so much that its difficult to focus attention on the content. Please, emphasize the content not the background.