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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] So Cold He's Hot (Pixel Joint CMYNRGB Challenge)
« on: April 19, 2007, 04:25:54 am »
Thanks! And orly? He's like 12, so I get paranoid of making him too big. Where would you suggest I expand his torso? (more in the back, or the front?)

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Pixel Art / Re: Link Portrait Remade
« on: April 19, 2007, 04:25:09 am »
Yep! But I still say he needs a little more cheek and chin on the (our) left side. And maybe skooch that eye over towards the ear more.

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Pixel Art / Re: gameboy color anims[UPDATE:4/18/07 directionals]
« on: April 19, 2007, 03:29:58 am »
It still looks a little too fast, IMO. He would only be breathing like that if he was winded after some major fighting. ;D Slow down the animation again and try having him hold his inhalation a little.

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Pixel Art / Re: Link Portrait Remade
« on: April 19, 2007, 03:18:13 am »
Hm. He doesn't have enough of a face on (our) left. His chin would jut out a little more, too. It just seems like he is missing almost half of his face. D:

His left (as in, our right) eye should be shifted over towards his ear a little. A little more skull at the back of his head would also help.

The colors you used are also pretty dull. :< There isn't a lot of vibrance or contrast to them. Try to maybe add a little bit of a different hue to the shades of the hair, skin and clothing, such as making the shadows on the green tunic and hat have some blue in them, etc.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Honorable Judge Bush
« on: April 19, 2007, 03:10:18 am »


This might help. The red lines are aligned to the original image. Compare that to the head you made.

I know you are trying to mimic the style, but you should also try to more accurately copy the shapes and proportions in the original picture. And that's about all the critique I can give you at this point.

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Pixel Art / [WIP] So Cold He's Hot (Pixel Joint CMYNRGB Challenge)
« on: April 19, 2007, 02:00:23 am »
Well, since not whole lot of people are active over on PJ, I thought I would hop over on Pixelation. I'm not here nearly enough, afterall. :B

This is for the CMYNRGB Challenge that's going on this week. Needless to say, we got stuck with a rather naughty palette. You can see some of the (MUCH BETTER) examples of what people have entered so far. I'm definitely not out to win the challenge; more to improve my dithering and color usage.



I really need help with the highlights on that stupid vest (that blue thing he's wearing.) It just seems wrong and ick. Well, the whole thing kinda seems like that, but... You know. C/C is what I'm looking for, so hop to it~

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Pixel Art / Re: Help desperately needed
« on: September 25, 2006, 07:42:20 pm »
I think the issue of her hand is that the depth of where her stomach is somewhat incorrect. To make it seem more natural, it should seem like her arm is pressed very closely to her side. Also, perhaps making her hand in a more "rigid" position that might happen in a panic, with her fingers spread, with the knuckles bent tightly and just the parts of her forefingers touching the wound, but not really "gripping" it. I don't know if that even made a lick of sense, but whatever. I tried. xD;

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General Discussion / Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« on: April 06, 2006, 01:29:23 am »
Ahh, I see. xD But, it's coming along great! I think you could add more contrast to his arms, but even still, they look much better. ;D Can't wait to see the final version... and the portrait. And maybe you could give him some kind of gauntlets around his wrists/arms? Maybe you could add some deadly spur weapons on them if you're going for the futuristic cowboy look? xD Just random thoughts~

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General Discussion / Re: King of Spriters 2006 - Project of the Millennium!
« on: April 04, 2006, 10:01:42 pm »
Hmm, the hair has kinda... meh... contrast. Try using more white in the area where the lightsource is on his hair. I'm really loving the shading on the pant legs, though. o: But it seems like he could use more shading around his groin. Some shading on the lower side of (his) left arm would make it look real nice, too. You've really got a really awesome design going, can't wait to see the end result. :3

And speaking of results... I've finished my sprite and portrait. xD If you do add it, dear Steve, please link me at http://stitchy.deviantart.com/ because uh... I've got nothing else. Anyways, here they are:

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Pixel Art / Re: Fighter
« on: April 02, 2006, 02:07:15 am »
The jeans really are eye-cathing. ;) And I think the shirt is just the right amount of wrinkly. xD Though, I think his neck is a little bit too thick around his chin. Other than that, it's coming along fantastically.

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