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Pixel Art / Re: Tiles
« on: May 09, 2008, 08:05:24 pm »
The only C+C I can give here, is that it miiiight need a little more contrast. Your tile kind of reminded me of this piece: http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/17613.htm, and there you can see what I'm talking about contrast.

Although, I don't think it's a vital thing to change IMO

EDIT: Arhhg! I forgot to comment on how awesome I think it looks!!!! I do think it looks really good, great work!!

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Pixel Art / Re: Pixel Shrimp Volume 3
« on: May 09, 2008, 07:57:29 pm »
Great improvement from before!!! Yes, what's mostly wrong (that I can see anyway  :-\ ) is  the AA on the back legs and the front claw (mostly its left) doesn't work well with teh x2 pixel technique you used on its mouth (which was a good idea btw). Also, it's tail is looking a bit "bubbly" at the moment, and it doesn't really look like it has an exoskeleton back there.   

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Pixel Art / Re: my little world ... [please C&C]
« on: May 09, 2008, 07:49:37 pm »
Did you change anything there??  :-\

I didn't mean the ball man, person, thing if that's what you changed. I meant (yes, it made NO SENSE whatsoever, but I suck at describing things over the internet. I need to be in person!!! With hand gestures and everything....) that the space that you pointed out in your "look bad?" edit made the platform not look solid/secured to the ground because it "didn't fit".

I'm sorry I say things that appear to be completely random.  :-X

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Pixel Art / Re: my little world ... [please C&C]
« on: May 08, 2008, 12:09:06 am »
First of all, I like the ball...even with no mouth  :P

And yeah, I think what you pointed out there is what he means by not fitting. It does look a bit...anti-gravityish[?] in my opinion...I think it would look better if it looked more "solid" to the ground.

Also, I think there are some problems with the tree. The big one is where the leaves meet the trunk, the trunk overlaps the leaves and is square. Also the repeated pattern that the tree is composed of isn't very appealing, an neither is that mushroom[?]. It needs to be more defined as a mushroom.

I like the smiley face in the rock tile, nice detail, but there needs to be more contrast in it. The shadows of the specific rocks should be more like...on the right side of the right picture O_o, I don't know if that's the emulators fault, but it looks better.

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