Yeah I call it done..  I fixed a lot of rocks and now Im going to add grass  bottom of the cliff... but I would like to hear some critic if there are something..

Definitely an improvement. The repetition is so subtle as to be a non-issue now. You could maybe add a few more sharp edges so it doesn't look quite so blobby near the top.

tim I believe you're thinking too restrained with the semantics here. Just because an artist says something is inspired by or is meant to resemble steampunk/gothic style doesn't mean it has to follow your idealized version of what that is. Let him make whatever he wants to make, the description is secondary. You don't have to 'protect' anything because nothing is being attacked.

To get on topic I feel like Sir Gregory's chin is pressed too far into his neck at the bottom, it looks quite awkward as a result. His pose gives me the impression he should be more relaxed than that.

Im not sure about this but I think the way u originally had it is better for large areas of single repeated tile as there is less noticable "pattern".
When u add stronger shadowy areas you will need more variation tiles to break up the repeats.

Actually from looking at his new version I think the more obvious darker areas make it seem less repetitive. I think it's because the eye focuses on the 2 differing levels rather than the 4 tiles... or something. At any rate, I like it like that personally.

Thanks guys, useful info. 

I'd say show more of the eel-guy's inner cheek or upper lip/mouth on the other side, like in the concept. Will give some more depth to his head.

Love these cure. Some of them seem to have thicker outlines than others, was that your intention? Mainly the top row has thinner outlines.