Here's some slight edits based on Sherman Gils comments.
added some depth to the legs
made the hair darker where it shows between the arm and the body
added some hair peaking out from the right side of her face to match the left
@Kcilc
I like what you did with the legs and the clothes. Although the hair is better done, the hairstyle itself isn't what I'm going for, which probably means I didn't do a good job on mine trying to convey what I wanted.
I like your skin tone a lot better than mine too.
This was my inspiration for her bangs
http://flickr.com/photos/ninjascience/272310368/
EDIT:
based on your edits:
changed the hair so it doesn't stick out more, went back to the red eyes, beefed up the arm a few pixels, changed the hair palette
@Atnas
Yeah, I had thought I had moved away from that impression on my figure, but maybe not.