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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Partisan Tactics Battles : NPA CHAOS!!
« on: March 21, 2008, 01:49:54 am »
I really like the vectory look when coupled with pixel art.  :)

Pixel Art / Re: Faces
« on: March 14, 2008, 01:18:20 am »
Better, but don't forget to move his hairline up. He doesn't have a forehead as it is.

Pixel Art / Re: Faces
« on: March 13, 2008, 10:01:17 pm »
I actually think his looks younger than yours. Yours has a tiny mouth and nose which appear on shriveled old folk. You might be able to get away without doing tocky's large bags-under-the-eyes and pull off a younger look than both yours and his. But you need the wide mouth and nose along with blockier form definition.

Pixel Art / Re: Lick that kitty
« on: March 13, 2008, 09:03:38 pm »

about the arm, its a bit obvious that was intentional here, and I quite like that choice he made.

Yeah... I don't know what I was thinking by saying that...

I like the AAing on the inside but not the outside. I take back my comment about the spots. I had a window open which was partly shining on my window.  :hehe:

Pixel Art / Re: Lick that kitty
« on: March 13, 2008, 07:17:08 pm »
I don't like the look of flat feet. The white circles above kitty's head are a little indistinguishable from the background. His arm is kind of... shapeless. Like a twizzler. Or spaghetti.

It made me laugh and I think it's very well done.  ;D

Pixel Art / Re: Faces
« on: March 12, 2008, 11:05:49 pm »
I'm a little too busy to do an example, but I can tell you that the hairline is way higher than where you have it on the orange haired guy.

Pixel Art / Re: Faces
« on: March 12, 2008, 09:59:16 pm »
It's pretty hard to critique because of the style. When I try to see if somethings wrong, I say, "Oh wait, style."

Avoid pillow shading the hair, and shade neater. Basically fix the shading on the hair so it builds the form and looks neat.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Sprites!
« on: March 12, 2008, 07:16:05 pm »
These aren't exactly kid friendly. I'm actually very creeped out by their faces. The shading is a bit inconsistent on the inside, and they might benefit from selout on the skin - The consistent outline on the skin does not look good.

Overall, they would benefit the most from better shading and maybe some color tweaking.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Shadow Shambler
« on: March 11, 2008, 11:37:34 pm »
I can't see the image.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] RPG Girl
« on: March 11, 2008, 07:47:58 pm »
In Helm's edit it seems as though the skirt is too flat, and I'm not sure if the skirt should be that reflective of light - it looks a bit like plastic. I like Helm's upper body and I Am Uh's lower body.  :)

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