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Messages - Franrek
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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Mechanic
« on: February 20, 2017, 11:04:11 pm »
I personally really prefer version without the outlines. Maybe you could work on something between? Make outlines little more visible on the right one but don't use as much black colour. That's just my suggestion and I'm not sure how would it work out.

The wrench looks kinda off comparing to the character. You could try making it more shiny in some parts and also add some shadows on it near character's head. Another thing that I noticed is that her left leg looks strange. It's beding angle is too big I think. Rest seems really cool for me :)

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] self-portrait
« on: February 06, 2017, 08:59:50 am »
You have to work on the shading. There is no actual lightsource and thereby a lot of pillow shading is represented.
Thx for sharing usefull guide. What version are you talking about? Edited on or orginal?

Added lighting from left side. On the right one just small changes without using diffrent colours or dithering. I tried adding dithering on the left one for more visible shades but I think it's too messy. Thoughs?

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] self-portrait
« on: February 05, 2017, 11:33:20 pm »
Palette edit

Thx great edit. I always have problem with creating good palletes. This one tho is just a little bit too colour full for me. I want it to be kinda realistic so i changed the colours a bit, made jeans diffrent from shirt. Added some small fixes and changed boots too, coz they were looking to bally and were merging with jeans too much for me.

Pixel Art / [WIP] self-portrait
« on: February 05, 2017, 02:22:34 pm »
I wanted to create portrait of myself in pixel art and I made this:

Looking foward to critique, tips and any other feedback.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Tree
« on: February 05, 2017, 01:21:01 am »
I totally agree that I worked on it in wrong order. I still love the progress I made thanks to you guys and I think it isn't that small. I know I can make it much better but as you said I would need to start over. That's why, for now I'll keep this one as it is and do it the right way from the beggining when I have the time to do so. I would love to work on it from the start but I have much more things that I need and want to do. Sorry for disapointing you guys if I did.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Tree
« on: February 04, 2017, 09:25:29 pm »
Update, I think it's near to being completed. Thanks to everyone that helped me

Pixel Art / Re: Tree
« on: February 01, 2017, 06:08:49 pm »
I used another darker colour for it tho. I guess that works out :)

Pixel Art / Re: Tree
« on: February 01, 2017, 02:18:21 pm »
Could you show me an example how to add more deph with out adding more colours? Small piece would be enough. I have no idea how to do it sorry :|

Fixed some texture and shape. That new dark colour wont stay there probably.

Pixel Art / Re: Tree
« on: February 01, 2017, 01:30:57 pm »
First of all thank you for useful feedback and positive support! It really makes me more motivated somehow.
Use your colours. Your darkest shade is only presented in such a small area. Why?
Well, I'm kinda lost on it. I've been told there's too much dark colour between leaves and now you tell me I use it too few. I'm not sure how and where to use it properly.
. I'm not sure if this comes from lack of experience or if it is just a bad habit.
Some of the spots you marked are looking that way coz of the long breaks i had between texturing. I did few stacks of bushed and came back to it few days later. Then I realised that i can do next one better and did them with slighly diffrent technique/style (?). It's also certain most of it is just lack of experience since, I'm not doing pixelart or any art that long time. I'll fix spots you marked and look for more flaws like that.

Pixel Art / Re: Tree
« on: January 31, 2017, 02:54:48 pm »
Thx for all the info and support but I don't think I want to make such big changes since this sprite is only for training and I already spent a lot of time on and I'm not sure if I'll use it anywhere. I'll use your tips when I make my next tree for sure tho!
About that, I'm not sure if I will be able to make it good looking without flatening it too much. I'll give it a try for sure :)

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