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Pixel Art / Re: Winged goblin - flight animation
« on: July 18, 2006, 01:21:05 pm »
What I notice immediately:
* He doesn't bend his arms at all, making it seem as though he has no elbows (I'm just thinking of most of the imp/demon aimations I've seen, and they usually bend their arms when they're flapping)
* The wing colors don't go very well with the rest of the sprite (duinno what's wrong with them -- too saturated is my first guess but I'm prolly wrong)
* Wings seem disconnected from arms (as if he is one of those old inventors who jumped off cliffs holding big wing contraptions) -- I don't know if that's what you intended, but if you want the wings to seem like part of him, ditch the dark outline on the arm at least.
* 3 frames is serviceable but it could look a lot nicer with 4 or 5.
* Middle frame looks like it has no arms
* No highlights on the dark brown "spikes" (or wooden frame?) of the wings
* Naturally the rest of his body should move a bit
I like it =D I just think I could like it a lot more ^_^
* He doesn't bend his arms at all, making it seem as though he has no elbows (I'm just thinking of most of the imp/demon aimations I've seen, and they usually bend their arms when they're flapping)
* The wing colors don't go very well with the rest of the sprite (duinno what's wrong with them -- too saturated is my first guess but I'm prolly wrong)
* Wings seem disconnected from arms (as if he is one of those old inventors who jumped off cliffs holding big wing contraptions) -- I don't know if that's what you intended, but if you want the wings to seem like part of him, ditch the dark outline on the arm at least.
* 3 frames is serviceable but it could look a lot nicer with 4 or 5.
* Middle frame looks like it has no arms
* No highlights on the dark brown "spikes" (or wooden frame?) of the wings
* Naturally the rest of his body should move a bit
I like it =D I just think I could like it a lot more ^_^