My first impression when I saw this thread was like " holy shit, is that really Bit-Blade?". Haven't really talked to you in like 5 years or so, since TEK. So I entered this thread and instantly recognized your style from back in the days.
I'm usually just lurking around these forums for inspiration, but when I saw your name I just thought I had to say:
Hi! By the way recognize this?
Yes, it's me, DxEdge.
Anyway I thought I'd help you with some critisism while I'm here so I made an edit to illustrate my crits:
It's a rough edit. But I thought it wasnt that important to finish it since it's just to show you what I mean.
So what I did was lower the color count to around 20 ( I could only count to 17 but graphicsgale kept telling me it was 20) and fixed the leg placement, now Im no expert on foreshortening, but I felt she was more stable this way. I also changed some of the colors like that pure black you had as outline to just a tad more purpleish color. I "fixed" the waist area aswell. What I mean is it wasnt looking very natural anatomy wise like baccaman mentioned. I also moved the torso a bit towards the viewer and did some edits on that armgun. Though now when I look at it, mine seem to have lost that illumination yours had.
With that said, I hope you finish it! its comming out great so far, but there are some flaws that could be worked on as said