You have made an incredible amount of progress! From your first silhouette to this final animation, great work my friend.Really liked how you dressed her hair, it fits great with the concept, and also the eyes, ggrrreat work bro, cheers for you!

Hi!

I'm feeling the same way as you,and let me tell you that coming to this place seeking help and critique is one of the best choices that i've made. Over the course of this last month i've learned so much from people that knows a lot more than me, and at first ,improving your art through completely unknown people gives you a huge boost of inspiration and ideas.

You are going to meet great artists like runensucher and mysterymeat here, and i'm sure that your project will have a huge progress through the feedback that you can gather here.

And speaking about your inconsistency about your projects, i think that you just have to think about them as a part of a whole new level of game design, learn from your mistakes. You can have something good out of something bad, you know? Anyway, we are here to help you, and hope the same from you.

Keep it up, my gringo!

I thought about narrow her face, but i think it's not necessary this time.

I tried 3 different types:

1.- Eyes with eyebrows.
2-.Angry face
3-."Mum, i burnt my eyebrows"-face.

I tried to reposition the eyes, and give her a bigger forehead, just like anime characters.I think that you can fit that kind of art style very well on your design.It's up to you buddy, this is just an idea.

Cheers bro!

All right, i get the point. So, you are saying that i need to turn my "Eye-antler kadabra" into an "Avada-snake-nose-kedabra", got it.