hello guys! i am trying to practice in pixel art - again. feedback is welcome, but please don't go and say "remove the pillow shading" or "you still going on with that pillow shading?" because this is not helpful (i mention this since i got comments like this on a facebook group). please tell me exactly what should be changed in this pixel art. be specific, instead of "the shading looks terrible" here is an example of what is HIGHLY appreciated: "the arms look too long. i think you should shorten them up a bit", or "the shading on the hair is too dark, maybe you should give it a lighter colour", or "maybe you should try to bring less contrast in your colours". those are just examples of course! but i hope you guys know what i mean with "specific" now.
also, i would love to know what DOES look good. if there is anything, of course.
i think this one i recently made looks good (if you have ideas of how to improve it though, i would love to know):
but this one i am not satisfied with:
i really did my best on it but i have no clue how to improve it!!
also i have been trying to improve this one:
if you guys have any advice on it it would be nice to know. especially the shading on the hair im not sure about.