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Pixel Art / first try in asymetrical shading
« on: January 31, 2018, 04:55:24 pm »
i made a fairy queen related to the fairy enemy i touched up before.

FAIRY QUEEN


(edit)


FAIRY ENEMY

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Pixel Art / fairy animation
« on: January 31, 2018, 02:41:58 pm »
i decided to redo some of my old stuff i made, i started of making it asymetrical but that ended up looking terrible so i am probably going to start that with a fresh sprite. today i wanted to focus more on animating. i actually like how it turned out so far but if you don't feel free to say it. i am going to try and animate the head still, since it seems very stiff.



head animation:

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Pixel Art / please help me with the shading of the body!! i am clueless!!
« on: January 22, 2018, 05:25:39 pm »
i spend so much time shading this body and it just feels like a waste giving up because i like the creature design so much :/
if anyone would be able to help me, that would be so great </3 the things on his body (the lines) are supposed to be fur.

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Pixel Art / any advice on this creature?
« on: January 01, 2018, 03:59:03 pm »
hey there! i was wondering what you guys thought of this creature i made. i think it looks good but i don't know if it's good since i can only see it from my perspective.


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Pixel Art / creature anim
« on: December 30, 2017, 04:57:27 pm »
hey!! i just started animating. this is my first time animating, what do you think? i am not sure if it's finished, maybe i should make the face also move in a way and his bell & belly? about the feet, i am not sure: i might need to add another frame to have the feet going backwards instead because right now i think it looks like he's dancing.






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General Discussion / really what's so bad about my pixel artwork?
« on: December 29, 2017, 08:37:09 pm »
hello! i decided to post this in general discussion because i am not really asking for critique, well sort of but not a specific piece. i have been pixelating for about a year, i did have a moment i saw how horrible my artwork was and it helped to improve. so yeah, now i improved, and i can see why no one ever asks me to commission them or gave any kind of reaction like a favorite on deviantart or a watch or something when i was so bad. but i really do think i improved so why is it still not happening? i did get a lot of help from others but noticed i can also do a lot on my own, i might still need a lot of critique, examples and help but.. i think my designs are honestly good, and that it could help people a lot because the hardest part for most people is thinking of something to draw and i do this without any help, and i do have some skill in coloring and shading so.. it's not that i am completely useless.

these are the reasons i can think of:

- my artwork is still horrible i just don't see it.
- since i still didn't delete my old artwork people avoid my page.
- it's just difficult to get known.

i really want to know so i can do something about it. if you can think of anything else than these reasons i would like to know :( please help!

here is my deviantart page:
https://beardedgrandma.deviantart.com/

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Pixel Art / need help with the shading of the ear
« on: December 27, 2017, 01:35:50 pm »
hello!! i have been trying to shade this ear already for a while on several ways but keeps looking weird. i have googled for a reference but can't find one that is easy to understand.
if you have any other tips to improve this creature i would love to hear.


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Pixel Art / who is this pokemon
« on: December 19, 2017, 02:24:31 pm »
hello most people don't know what this is supposed to be sooooo please tell me what you think it is

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Pixel Art / how to fix
« on: October 13, 2017, 05:20:26 pm »
hello guys i have been working hours on making this character better but i can't manage to fix it. i am not very good in pixel art and i am trying to improve. i hoped you guys have any advice on how to do this.

i don't like the knees i made and i am not sure about the dress. i do like the hair and face i made a little but feedback is welcome.



a tiny change in the eyes

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Pixel Art / critique on pixel art
« on: September 14, 2017, 11:25:13 am »
hello guys! i am trying to practice in pixel art - again. feedback is welcome, but please don't go and say "remove the pillow shading" or "you still going on with that pillow shading?" because this is not helpful (i mention this since i got comments like this on a facebook group). please tell me exactly what should be changed in this pixel art. be specific, instead of "the shading looks terrible" here is an example of what is HIGHLY appreciated: "the arms look too long. i think you should shorten them up a bit", or "the shading on the hair is too dark, maybe you should give it a lighter colour", or "maybe you should try to bring less contrast in your colours". those are just examples of course! but i hope you guys know what i mean with "specific" now.
also, i would love to know what DOES look good. if there is anything, of course.

i think this one i recently made looks good (if you have ideas of how to improve it though, i would love to know):

but this one i am not satisfied with:


i really did my best on it but i have no clue how to improve it!!

also i have been trying to improve this one:

if you guys have any advice on it it would be nice to know. especially the shading on the hair im not sure about.

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