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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Cyberpunkish character
« on: February 27, 2017, 07:35:11 am »
Agreed more lighting and form study + references would greatly help you enhance this piece.

Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] How can I make this look better?
« on: February 24, 2017, 09:29:56 am »
What is it? There are a lot of colour values on here.

Pixel Art / Re: GBC Beam Kirby
« on: February 24, 2017, 09:22:22 am »
I'm not seeing any image, can you try uploading it again? I click "Get share link" and then "bb code" box and copy the whole thing in after uploading to imgur.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Post Apocalyptic Robot
« on: February 21, 2017, 01:30:10 am »
I think the white rectangle is a hole. But it is a little strange that you don't see his hand behind it.

Pixel Art / Re: Anatomy Study Dump
« on: February 21, 2017, 01:28:37 am »
The whole idea about the technique is to try and get you thinking in 3 dimensions, and from there to be able to draw from memory. Currently you are entirely limited to 2 dimensions in your thought process.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Post Apocalyptic Robot
« on: February 21, 2017, 12:40:53 am »
Hey I was following the old thread before and think the design is really cool. I think it's better to keep posting follow-ups in the same thread so they can easily be read through.

But since it's here (maybe an admin can move it), I would say that this design and style is really awesome. You just need to keep pushing it to sell it. Make it look like it is standing in an environment - add some background and more unified and interesting lighting. Work on the silhouette a bit - if that is rusted metal it would have parts completely corroded off it. Otherwise if it's a good condition robot it wouldn't be fully rusty. Really try to get that kind of thought cemented in the piece.

I think the hand is fine, just needs some shading. Maybe the wrist could be a little thinner.

Also in terms of design, that gun is cool, but I don't think it matches his japanese influence - it's a bit too much of a stretch. Maybe shape the gun more to look like traditional japanese swords or items, or get rid of it altogether for more traditional weapons.

Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] I'm new to this, but would love some feedback
« on: February 19, 2017, 08:11:20 pm »
Agreed, keep it up. You're using much better colours and contrast now. The cup handle could be a little thicker.

Pixel Art / Re: Ooze critique wanted. New Artist.
« on: February 19, 2017, 08:35:51 am »
Yes I believe I am talking about making that more noticable. I am imagining internal reflections plus reflection from a lighter ground colour below it combined with subsurface scattering due to the opaqueness of the slime blob. It would really light it up from the edges/ground plane. Here are some real world examples of what I mean (if the image breaks, google subsurface scattering grapes):

Pixel Art / Re: [C+C][WIP]NES Style Character Animations and Effects
« on: February 19, 2017, 12:03:53 am »
I think the outline looked fine, but the gun is still shrinking into the arm. There should always be a fixed distance from the elbow to the gun casing at the wrist.

Pixel Art / Re: Platform charecter sprites, looking for tips!
« on: February 19, 2017, 12:01:08 am »
Yeah really cool for youngster's game. I'd move the eyes up just a little, but that's personal preference.

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