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Messages - miro42
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Pixel Art / Re: Female sci fi pilot
« on: July 10, 2014, 02:12:21 am »
Hello there, hellotherekyle.  Hah!

My first thought is that you need to work on anatomy in perspective.  There are some very severe issues with both the rear and front leg.  Here's a .gif that I just messed with.

First up is yours of course.

The second with the green arrow is actually the middle line of her stomach and the two points are her crotch creases.

The third is my sloppy edit.  I lengthened her front leg quite a bit.  It could probably even go further.  The rear leg is at such an awkward angle, especially for the lower leg to be coming down in a direct profile pose, so I threw that one into perspective as well.

The fourth edit is just me messing around.  From the way you had shaded originally the front leg could easily have been the back leg.



I hope that helps a bit.   ;D

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Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Floating Island
« on: July 10, 2014, 01:11:32 am »
I agree with Phoenix849 on the bird in the sphere.  It looks almost like the rock has a tattoo.  Maybe if the one of the bird's wings was out of the rock a bit to show it isn't a part of it, and/or put the birds' shadows down as well.

My biggest concern is that I would also say the rock is too spherical.  It seems very out of place considering how organic the rest of the picture is.

As far as your leaves, I think they look amazing.  I don't know if you wanted to go into more detail on what you already have on the left side, but I think less is more in this case.  Finish up the right and it'll look even better.  :y:

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP][C+C] Child (maybe hero) running Animation
« on: July 10, 2014, 12:51:03 am »
You hit it spot on 32.  I always forget about arcs.  Anyhoo, here's the newer version.  I've drastically changed the arm swings and arced the head a bit, but that still needs improvement I think.


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Pixel Art / [WIP][C+C] Child (maybe hero) running Animation
« on: July 09, 2014, 12:50:03 am »
Here's a dude running, totally a WIP.  I've already noticed a lot of proportion problems, as well as just plain bad animation, but I figure as much input as early as possible would be a big help, especially on animation and color.  These are just base colors right now with a bit of color difference so I didn't confuse which leg was moving which direction while animating ;).


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Challenges & Activities / Re: The Daily Sketch
« on: July 08, 2014, 01:22:53 am »
Hey all!  This is my first daily sketch.  It's a WIP.


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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Smoking Girl Animation
« on: July 05, 2014, 02:14:50 am »
Thanks, FrostPumpkin.  I guess it's obvious I don't actually smoke. :P  Anyhoo, I changed the cigarette and put a line under her skirt.  I don't know what to do with the legs.  I like them as is, but if there are better ways I'll certainly take it into account.

Well, I'm off to work on another animation.  I feel like I'm losing my creative flow in reworking this one.

Enjoy:


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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Smoking Girl Animation
« on: July 04, 2014, 08:39:14 pm »
Done with the extra sucking in and the exhale of smoke.



Also, I was challenged by someone to make what he calls a chicken-rat version, which is basically a meth head.


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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Smoking Girl Animation
« on: July 04, 2014, 05:19:38 am »
Actually, Capy is what inspired me last night while I was pixel-ing it up.

You're right about the extra arm frame.  That was just me being lazy.  Shame on me.  ;D

Original:


New:


So here's the new animation with two extra arm frames.  I figure that since I was lazy on putting one extra arm movement in I'd go the extra mile this time and put two in, one going up and another one with her arm coming down.   :P

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Pixel Art / [C+C] Smoking Girl Animation
« on: July 04, 2014, 03:46:58 am »


Hey all!  I'm new to Pixelation and to really doing pixel art, especially the animation side of it.  Any and all help you can give would be great. :P

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