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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Portrait for avatar ?
« on: February 03, 2014, 08:03:28 am »
The image needs more shades. Especially the right part, judging by the highlights. Also, the forehead seems to be too high, but i don`t know if it`s supposed to be like that.

Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Pacific Grove
« on: January 07, 2014, 09:30:24 am »
Wow, I couldn`t even suppose you had lived in such place. Here in Syberia it`s not that colourful, but the nature has its own magnificence.

About the work: now it`s better, but the ocean is still looks like poor because it is empty - just one color. I`m sure you were going to fill it anyway. And the top sky needs something, just like simple clouds, but there are clouds lower. Think of it. May be, a flock of birds will help. Also there is a space in the left down corner where a couple of bright flowers would fit.
I can`t say anything about the perspective, though, yet it hasn`t got enough details. Keep up the work!  :y:

Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Pacific Grove
« on: January 05, 2014, 11:34:50 am »
The picture is great. I want to stress that I like the original version more than wolfenotics` one, so I think you don`t have to change the whole composition but still have to work with the balance. Add something to the left side. A part of beach with sand, or, may be, rocks with crabs and seagulls (corals won`t fit (suit?)), or at least just sea foam and waves, I don`t know.

If you don`t mind "spoiling" the clear sky, you can add a volcano with a big smoke cloud. It will create some contrast to the bright colors.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Newbie - Iso Dungeon Tiles
« on: January 04, 2014, 04:58:58 pm »
Where is the light source? I can`t define it. Like it`s beyond the room. So I think you should add some torches and change the lights\shades completely according the torches.

Pixel Art / Re: Undead Alchemist
« on: January 04, 2014, 12:03:27 pm »
Despite I`m completely inexperienced as an artist and I haven`t made any good art yet, I can`t help saying I don`t like the hands. Not exactly the hands but their position. They are not "living". The alchemist seems to be asked to stretch them forward. The thing you should do is to change their situation towards the fireball and to add some energy. Just to spread fingers, for example. Look at all these pictures and compare the hands with those which you`ve drawn.

P.S. The sleeves usually hang on the arms, don`t they? I`d remove the black space between the arms and the sleeves` upper parts.

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