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Pixel Art / Re: Red-Haired Character Critique
« on: October 09, 2013, 02:50:11 pm »
The hair is confusing. If you are going for a messed up hair look try going for ordered chaos.(I am thinking of the characters of DBZ for some reason.) The leaning problem is definitely there. The problem is more in the weight distribution. It doesn't need much tweaking and you could possibly adjust one of the legs to make it look correct. The green eyes are very subdued next to the reds and purples. I am not sure this was your intention.

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Pixel Art / Re: Dancing Game [WIP] [C+C]
« on: October 07, 2013, 06:53:52 am »
Thank you for the feed back YellowLime and numlock.

I took both of your critiques into consideration and updated the animation. I still don't think it is quite where I want it to be, but I need a break from staring at it.




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Pixel Art / Dancing Game [WIP] [C+C]
« on: October 06, 2013, 02:22:24 am »
Hello everyone,

This is the first animation in a new game I have started working on. All pixel art I post here is for a game about characters who dance. These characters will have about 10-12 animations each and I don't have anything set in stone yet. I would love any critiques you guys have about the current state of any pixel art I have on here so feel free to tell me what I may be doing wrong.  The limitations are to fit all characters within 32 px wide by 48 px tall.

Edit: Here are the latest versions of all animations.



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This first character is a fat fire elemental. I wanted to get away from the stereotypical elemental body shape and also use a body type that would be enjoyable to watch dance.

If you are interested in other pixel art I have done feel free to check out my tumblr. http://digitaltruth.tumblr.com/

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