This is a knight im working on. im pretty happy with the body but the head is giving me trouble. Perhaps is squishing the detail in such a  small area but i cant get it to look right.

Any help to move it along would be greatly appreciated.


Edited


OK happy with the head now but the Scarf under his head
is not really looking much like a  scarf.
The image below is what im want to go for but how exactly i would represent it is stumping me



Edited Again



K i tried my hand at it again im happy iwth this but id like some feed back.