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Challenges & Activities / Re: The Daily Sketch
« on: January 09, 2015, 11:26:09 pm »
Not sure about the anticipation in the beginning.
Try reversing his windup so that it looks like he is building up resistance. Winding-up in the same direction he is going to swing kind of make sense, but not if he stops before actually swinging. I think it will be way better.
Alternatively I suppose you could keep it the way he is but go straight from the windup in place to the actual attack without the pause. It would be an improvement on what you have but a very different effect then what I think you were going for.