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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] [WIP] Scroll Keeper frog.
« on: July 13, 2017, 10:40:58 pm »
Really cool character
I think the cone of the hat is a bit out of perspective. The flowy animation on the scroll doesn't contrast very well with the stiffness of the rest of the animation. I think you need to pick a direction.
You need more contrast in your colours. This character will get lost in the background very very easily. All of your materials are shaded in pretty much the same way. Same number of colours in the ramp, they all react the same way to the light. Especially things like the buckles should be more bold with less gradation and more contrast and the skin should be a bit slick and shiny.
I think the cone of the hat is a bit out of perspective. The flowy animation on the scroll doesn't contrast very well with the stiffness of the rest of the animation. I think you need to pick a direction.
You need more contrast in your colours. This character will get lost in the background very very easily. All of your materials are shaded in pretty much the same way. Same number of colours in the ramp, they all react the same way to the light. Especially things like the buckles should be more bold with less gradation and more contrast and the skin should be a bit slick and shiny.