This is a scene i completed some months ago and has allready been sent off to the person who commisioned it from me.

It however has been bothering me since. I stumbled across this forum today and have been reading the critism given to by many of the pixelists here. It seems increadibly usefull and i would like some insite into what i could be doing better as this is one peice i want to improve.

I will be editing this peice and reposting as your crit comes in, this is a learning curve for me so don't think the work you put into replies wont be apreciated. Keep in mind there is nothing in the subject matter of this picture i have ever done before. Excluding the sunsety sky. which i realise needs alot more work. *is the first thing she's changing*

Program used: 100% MS Paint, converted to .gif format by Adobe Photoshop 5.0 Limited Edition. (Limited ed is just code for crap bye and bye.)