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Pixel Art / Re: Andross from Starfox
« on: May 19, 2008, 06:49:11 am »
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Bra eller anus?
Nice or ass?

are you swedish?

One question... You know it isn't perfect? and you think it's just shit...
I'll be honest with you, it don't make me want to help you at all but I will give it a try...

First if I remember right, his nose looks a little odd now. I think he has very visible nostrilles, hasn't he?
It isn't so bad actually but you can see very clearly the line in the middle that you have copied one side
and put it together, nothing wrong with that besides you dont get so much expression in his face and it
makes the hair look "strange". As for his eyes, the eyebrows are a little wierd. Maby you could take away the
hair that hang over his eyes, now you can't tell if it is the actual eyecontour or the eyebrows. You should probably
add a real iris instead of the white.

About the colours and shading. In some places It looks really good but sometimes a little messy. Like the colour around his face(the red)
should be darker and maby not red, cos' down at his chin it looks really good. Try a darker purple and good luck!


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Pixel Art / Re: New game project mockup!
« on: May 15, 2008, 09:27:29 pm »
Hi there!

Thanks for all your great comments!!

This is my final edit before I go on with the game, I need to draw some enemies, do some animations and stuff..



I changed the Groundtiles so they are more visible and i changed the palmleaves!

Thank you again for you efforts! It's been very educational!
I will give you a download link when the game is done! Keep an eye open!   ;D

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Pixel Art / Re: New game project mockup!
« on: May 15, 2008, 05:12:40 pm »
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something is still looking weird in the palmtrees' tops, imho.
as if shading and general shape of the leaves had no relationshipˇ
hm, if you have to make a critic..maby you should have something important to say about it and explain why and come with a conclusion?

This is the edit:



I changed the groundtile, palm and backgroundcolour

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Pixel Art / Re: New game project mockup!
« on: May 15, 2008, 11:26:10 am »
Doppleganger

Your edit is great, thank you! It gives you the feeling of a tropical heat.
And you are right about the lightsource it will probably get very complicated when I
turn the sprites in other directions.

I will upload my edit as soon as possible, cos' right now i'm in school.  :(


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Pixel Art / New game project mockup!
« on: May 14, 2008, 04:59:56 pm »
Hi!

This is a new game project im working on and this is the first mockup:



(First I thought that a backpack not was very interesting but i see now that it makes sense with the old gun and stuff)

It's a pirate game(I'm obliged to say more)

I need some help with a cupple of things..
First, I can't come up with an nice "Item" icon for the boarder and a good lifespan.(The board is temporarily)
Second, to do a background for a 640 x 480 screen without too many details but still a powerful and sharp one(The one i use now is temporarily too).
Third, do you think I need to make a actual ground tile or will it make it messy?
I have been accused for drawing broken outlines and I hope you can see that I'm making progress  :P


I hope you can help me :)
Other crits are also welcome but not necessarily changed cos' of time pressure, I will do my best!

Thank you


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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] RPG Girl
« on: May 12, 2008, 08:24:56 pm »


The colorful one looks best in my opinion.

I dont know why you say that, the pixels is totaly out of control.. In my own opinion, the colours that are used
are very important to get the right atmosphere and it dont matter how great your picture is in it selves if you use the wrong colours.
Therefore, I think the original picture don't give me any feelings at all, it's only hurting my eyes...

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] RPG Girl
« on: May 10, 2008, 07:35:26 pm »
Opacus

Hey! Thank you for you help! I haven't really tought about this before, you can never
stop learning. I will try out my new experiences as soon as possible!
Great edit by the way!

Feron

It's alright dude! The critics gets you goin'...
IT WILL ONLY MAKE ME STRONGER!  ;)

see you later guys!

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] RPG Girl
« on: May 10, 2008, 12:41:38 pm »
dude what is it with you and terrible selout!!

i like your edit, but those broken black outlines just look awful.

I am sorry I troubled you. My intentions were good...
But I cant remember the last time people had black outlines

This is just for you Feron  :y: ;)



I hope you are pleased  ;D

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] RPG Girl
« on: May 10, 2008, 11:33:16 am »
Hi!

This is a really messed up pixelart from all the edits! way to many unnecessary colours and to much highlights...
especially the skin. I mean, if you take a look on your own skin, its not shining like you have sunoil all over your body(normally)
If you take away much of the highlights it helps to get the small details to look sharper, you get better shading and more
contrasts. I made a small edit to show you what i mean:

Old: Edit:

I changed the colours, I shortened her skirt a little cos I think she looks more like a farmergirl then a prettygirl  ;D
But most of all i got rid of the messed up a.a and highlights to give her a more cleaner look.

Hope its of any use!



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Pixel Art / Re: Running animation
« on: May 09, 2008, 02:20:53 pm »
Hi again!

sorry i kept you waiting :)
Its great that you help me this much!

Edit:


(sorry for the black dotts from his foot in the right corner)

I changed 2 foot frames when he is landing so he is now doing the famus heelstrike  ::)
I leaned him forward some and gave his body a little movement...

better now?  ;D

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