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Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Lingerie? Really?
« on: June 11, 2011, 01:46:09 pm »
Here's my last shot at getting the torso right. I hope it looks better now! I mostly just messed with the inside. Thanks for the help, Eyecraft.


I think I'll be starting on her clothes and refining now unless there's still something glaring.

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Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Lingerie? Really?
« on: June 10, 2011, 03:25:16 am »
The reference might be hard to come by. I used this nifty thingy to find it, so if you wanna try your luck to come across my ref, be my guest. I mirrored her btw, so the ref is facing the right.

Thanks everybody for all of the critique and edits! I've tried to take everything into consideration, and here's the result.

Better, worse?

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Pixel Art Feature Chest / GR#053 - Lingerie? Really? - Anatomy, Pose
« on: June 09, 2011, 06:11:59 am »
Yup.



It's obviously not finished, and I'll be dressing her in due time. I wanted to get the anatomy down before venturing into clothes land, so anything that I've screwed up yet? I'm not sure if I'm sold on my palette either...it just seems off. I'm terrible with skin tones, so any critique would be much appreciated.

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Pixel Art / Re: Halp!
« on: January 14, 2011, 11:03:42 pm »


Ohhhh, I can definitely see your confusion now, Cure. I hope I've fixed up the things you mentioned.

Gliding, I hope that I've fixed her weirdness now since I really really really really really don't wanna rework her from the bottom up like you have. I like what you've done with her hair and how you captured all of the facial features. I hope that I've improved her face.

Sorry for the long delay. I'm back in school and had to get myself back into my routine.

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Pixel Art / Re: Plane Sprite (inspired by Dodonpachi)
« on: January 11, 2011, 07:25:22 pm »
I think I actually like the older wings. They seem a little more dynamic and flowy.

Random thought that may be useful or may not:
I also can't help but feel you've been coloring your ship a little bit randomly. Some blue here, a little yellow there...there isn't really any kind of "pop" to it you could say. Generally, ships like this are mostly grey with a few defining colors that can focus your eyes to specific parts, and help you identify it. Think about the difference between an Indian blanket and a U-haul truck.

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Pixel Art / Re: Halp!
« on: January 10, 2011, 05:56:08 am »
When I'm leaning up against a wall, this pose is very easy and natural for me. I should've been a bit more clear about what she was actually doing.


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Pixel Art / Re: Halp!
« on: January 10, 2011, 05:21:24 am »
I knew something was terribly wrong with the pose! I knew the hips were completely screwed over and I needed to fix them some day, but I didn't even think about the arm and middle. Well, I did think about the arm and tried my hardest to get into her position—after failing I didn't bother fixing it, giving myself a little bit of artistic freedom.

I love the wonderful face! It's not quite the expression I want but it is positively beautiful.

@xegnma: I love what you did with her! I took it in a slightly different direction with the edits and critique that I've already been given earlier, but you caught what I was hoping to achieve with her attitude.

Thank you so much everyone for all of the help and edits and stuff! :)


Here's an update trying to resolve some of the pose issues and face catastrophe and stuff. Also, she's supposed to be leaning up against a wall; I just never drew a background. It's a bit rough, but I'll wait to make sure there aren't any more triple-jointed pose strikages that I need to tame before polishing again.

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Pixel Art / Halp!
« on: January 09, 2011, 01:44:33 am »


So I have the time of my life trying to make faces this size. I just can't seem to get it quite right...she's supposed to have a little smile and a slightly seductive gaze. She's also supposed to look human. If anything else seems out of place please lemme know.

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Pixel Art / Re: Looking for some sprite critique...
« on: November 29, 2010, 04:05:55 pm »
Just a quick thought: if tails are supposed to help balance the creature, shouldn't they try to counteract the hip sway by swishing to the left when the hips are to the right and vice versa?

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Archived Activities / Re: Secret Santa 2010 - The Sign up
« on: November 16, 2010, 07:44:35 pm »
Sign me up!!!

I like pastel sunsets, futuristic skylines, cute girls, slightly quirky things, and cool hair.

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