Hey! Just wanted to say that I like your work so far.

There is something wrong for me with the changes on the table. Even though I'm happy that it's less noisy than the first version, now that it's darker we cannot see the stick of the umbrella as we saw it on the first version. And I think it affect a lot readability on this couple (table/umbrella), it's harder to imagine that it is plugged in a hole in the middle of the table. So maybe come back to lighter table color ?

For the blue chairs, I like them a lot, they feel really realistic to me! The two last ones on the right looks better to me in the shading.

Hello ! Today I made a diplodocus and weapon for our Human --> //

For now I'm doing only stills cause it will be easier to test the game with it.

What I would like to know and improve is my shading and color choices. I'm not sure about them and I'm quiet doing it randomly, (Usually I go from darker to lighter colors by hue shift toward yellow, decreasing saturation and increasing value). Do you have some tips regarding these two pictures ?

I also made a grass tile, but gosh it's hard for me to render good... I guess it's because I need other tile to diversify?

Here is the tile -->

And the preview :


For now it's just to help the game developer to render the game easier with some graphics, but I got to improve this grass...

Thank you for your remarks! They are all very accountable so I modified my sprites like this :





- The eye gives way more personality
- The cleaner back is more readable
- Less pillow shading on the head
- Back leg is not bending
- Smoke looks more natural

Thank you for helping me improving this little triceratops ! They are more happy.

There is also a thing that I find difficult, it's to make every views of the sprite as good as we directly recognize that it is the same character... I have the feeling that on my front view triceratops looks bigger. Isn't it ?

Thank you a lot for your review !! It's very constructive and very interesting.

On the background, I will try as you said for the increasing saturation depending on the layers, it could be very nice (I will also add some platform and character so we could see the difference with the very front layers.

It's the first time I use so much dithering and I did it to see the result and to create this true pixel art effect, I quite happy about it. Except maybe this left corner of the sky as you said, I'll try to improve this part.

For the squash and anticipation, I used it on my very first animation, it's very good technic but not for my helicopter I think (or maybe a little anticipation yes I'll try it out)

Here my very first animation :

I'll post later the updated image of my helicopter. Thank you!