that actually helps a lot, thanks


also i just noticed i hadn't finished editing the female's arms... oops, lol

The girl legs are stretching when inhaling, this feels unnatural. try instead to only move her upper torso. fill it with air so her chest bends outward a bit.

from another thread, but applies here

I'd personally welcome and gladly except each critique

thats a big thing, a lot of people that critique personally and feel insulted when they get it

i myself have an issue with getting critique sometimes, if theres too much negative it makes me just wanna stop doing what im doing
i try to ignore and push past that, but most people will always give in to the negative instead of trying to work through and improve

it sucks too cuz i've been really loving watching this topic and how much improvement has happened here

well i've made it a bit better, and started work on a female base, too
could use some input

the hell gate needs something filling in the blank spaces, even just a texture
the skull at the top could use some depth, too

and the character looks great, tho the face has little readability
her animation might move a bit too much for just breathing
having it run down the entirety of the legs might be a bit much

also are the bits of her hair supposed to stick out?

overall this is great stuff, cant wait to see how this all ends up =]