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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Blonde girl
« on: June 20, 2011, 09:50:17 pm »
Thanks a bunch for the edit, moket!! I definitely need to tone down the highlights. That link you provided has a lot of good examples. I'll read the details when I have some time :)

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Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Still Image Summon
« on: June 20, 2011, 09:46:52 pm »
I'm not loving the olive green on her skin unless it's supposed to be moss. Also, she seems to be missing eyebrows.

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Pixel Art / Re: detective
« on: June 20, 2011, 04:07:25 am »
Here's an overall edit:


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Pixel Art / Re: Very small game character
« on: June 19, 2011, 11:00:00 pm »
It looks like he's limping because in the jump cycle, he pushes off the ground with the right leg (left leg in the air), then as soon as he lands, he does this again. Also, in the first and last frame, seems like he's on the ground for both, yet, he's a bit lower in the last frame.

I dunno much about animation, so just throwing suggestions out there :)

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Pixel Art / Re: Critique/Suggestions, anyone? [Fixed x2 : )]
« on: June 19, 2011, 02:52:22 pm »
Some critiques for the second image:

The outlines look quite broken everywhere.
The blue thing on the staff looks like a hand, even though I assume you're going for... feathers?
The girl's colours are too similar. Consider changing her hair colour, boot colour and staff colour (the purple part)
The style is nice. I like the shape of the cape.
Maybe less hair and more face?
Her bracelet is too close in colour to her skin. I didn't even see it til now.
Outline her fingers on the right hand more.
The spiky part of the hair clashes with the smooth flowy part

Alright, peace, I'm out

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Pixel Art / Re: detective
« on: June 19, 2011, 02:45:28 pm »
Is he supposed to be wearing a trench coat? Right now he looks like he's wearing parachute pants tucked into boots. Also, the arms are too curved.

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Pixel Art / Re: Seabeast
« on: June 19, 2011, 02:43:38 pm »
Even with just black and white, try to shade the body to give it a more 3D feel. Right now the body is mostly noise... it communicates some texture, but not much.

I kinda like the look of this creature... dodosaurus?

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Pixel Art / Re: WIP: Lucy Liu's eye animation
« on: June 19, 2011, 02:39:41 pm »
The animation looks nice. Small anatomy tweak regarding the inner corner of the eye where the tear duct (?) is:


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Pixel Art / Re: Very small game character
« on: June 19, 2011, 02:33:42 pm »
I like the second one slightly more.

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Pixel Art / Re: Very small game character
« on: June 18, 2011, 07:10:23 pm »
Pretty nice so far! In the third frame, I feel like the scarf should still be visible.

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