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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Small dragon. Animation.
« on: May 21, 2007, 03:30:51 pm »
Fixed some moments:
Thanks Adarias, it's better? If I right understand you.

As I say earlier, I use small jump's for animation girl-dragon. And fixed some frame - something as you say, Turbo.
Maybe need the same animation for both?

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] First try.
« on: May 18, 2007, 03:09:11 pm »
Good progress I see ))
But with his teeth. Ptoing is right - it's not light understand... look as strange nose. Try remove strong line on chin to mouth and face is obtain a less fractional - something like on sharprm but more less this line on face.

sharprm: Funny hair  ;D

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Small dragon. Animation.
« on: May 18, 2007, 03:03:05 pm »
Skecth animation - it's look like a giant lizard?
Which of type animation is more appropriate for this?

Maybe less head bounce? But on surface he is look not too bad...

Pixel Art / Re: Dragon Slayer CC/suggestions :)
« on: May 17, 2007, 09:05:58 am »
Nice! ))
Maybe you think about basic atmosphere? More darkness, contrast, dramatic. You cave is too light, more depth and lose detail on back wall - than she go more to back. Some recolor on dragon.
Somethinks like this:

And of course the highlights, remove unnecessary details for accent on primary scene (battle) and work with form more on dragon and man?

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Small dragon. Animation.
« on: May 17, 2007, 08:37:47 am »
Very nice, although I think a more lizard-like animation would be more easily recognizable, this reminds me more of a dog run animation...

If you decide to keep this, i suggest making his head move forward and down more with each step, showing more weight, and make the forward paws step further front, and cross his back legs when he takes a step with the hind legs (like racing dogs do while running).

No about head, but Yes about other, most likely. ))  Maybe I decide this move, but for dragon-girl. And I have only 32x64 for animation - I fear this not enough for long throw of back legs, but I am try.

This actually looks more like how a rabbit would move rather than a large lizard.
Maybe studying the movements of a kimodo dragon would help some?

Yes komodo dragon, large lizard - next move will be something like this...

Pixel Art / Re: My first ever animation
« on: May 17, 2007, 08:24:32 am »
Ok, I see. Look on this sketch.
With form i talk about this:

Animation sketch - see on move shoulders and foots

I think, you understand me now and i hope this is usefull for you.

Pixel Art / Re: My first ever animation
« on: May 16, 2007, 02:54:33 pm »
He needs more brutal, like on front view. Work with forms you person than do animation.
Now you animation for different persons, not for one.
Animation from this side is too flat and not enough move shoulder.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] First try.
« on: May 16, 2007, 02:48:42 pm »
NIce process!
But reflex line is not so constant, more play on this line, in some piece she is must be a lost. Now his stomach look as soap bubble )).
Good work.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Small dragon. Animation.
« on: May 16, 2007, 02:44:09 pm »
I am finished other task - now time to animate dragons!!!
The first sketch animation for the boy:
on surface:

in stripe:

I like this motion, but this motion - it's small jumps, i tried do another motion like a varan (giant lizard), maybe this will be more useful... will see.

dragonrc Thanks - after you edit, i think a one-color skin is unless, just all colors will be with light front side (like on you edit)
Feron Sorry, if I not correct understand you ))
Please comment ))

Pixel Art / Re: Platformer mockup WIP
« on: April 27, 2007, 02:53:25 pm »

For top I am mean (sorry for my english) - just some up him  :)

 :-[  I still don't get it.  I'm sorry.  And don't apologize for your english, you're trying, and you're much better than I am at any other language besides english.  If I didn't fix it in this version, could you point it out in an edit?

If you see closely, you already do what I mean. It's good! ))
Now it's look much better!
Which column? Hmm... I think if you choose any two - and alternation they... will be nice.
But about pattern on arch - I am not sure, maybe you think more on this?

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