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Pixel Art / Re: (WIP) tactics character(s)
« on: January 09, 2007, 04:55:02 pm »
This edit looks kinda crap but basically shows you that you could make you animation by drawing every frame and not just
moving hands and feet around.



Also use less colors and make it simpler.

Thanks for the reply :)
Believe it or not, I drew every frame on its own (only the feet, i copied the rest), maby you will notice some equalties between the sprites, but that is because i drew the next frame with the previous frame next to it (hard to explain). I did just move the arms, but of course i edited them so it looked better.

I was planning on using less colours when the sprite was finished ;)
But with all the editing it always stays a big pixel mess so ill do it afterwards.

Get rid of the gold stuff until your animation is finished.

Well, they aren't really annoying or something and the animation if pretty much finished. (and when I edit something, like the next sprite you'll see below, I usually remove the gold pieces and place em back afterwards).
 
Your piece the arms don't rotate right, they look like they rotate down.

Is this better?:

 old      new
If not, I think I don't really understand what you mean..

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Pixel Art / Re: (WIP) tactics character(s)
« on: January 09, 2007, 02:39:34 pm »
Thanks ;D


I did it with this image:

Hope you don't get problems with this one ;)

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Pixel Art / Re: (WIP) tactics character(s)
« on: January 09, 2007, 02:14:43 pm »
Please get rid of the {url} tags around the images. We can zoom in on images by clicking them and it kinda throws me off when I go to zoom and something pops up.

Ah, I don't seem to have problems with this myselve but I'll change it so you don't have problems with it either. I'm new on these forums though and I don't know how to do this, I tried the mona lisa button but it shows    img]  /img]

The weird thing about the 2nd version is that the chest is moving horizontally, but the shoulders aren't, which is pretty impossible as far as I know. Same with the hips. Hips should move accordingly with the legs. In both images.

Well, i'm thinking of ditching(?) the 2nd image anyway, but ill try to do something about the hips in the first image.

The legs themselves need work as well. The closest leg doesn't seem to step like the far leg does.

That looks strange indeed, ill try to fix that.

It just looks like he goes to step forward then changes his mind. I think this is because he never seems to set his foot down.That leg needs to come further down than the far one because of its nearness. It also seems to start going backwards while the foot is still tilted up...Well, I guess that happens, but not to the extent you have it in your image.

I don't really understand this but ill try fixing the front leg first

Nice job so far, though. Hope I help.
Oh, and hi.
Thanks, and the things you pointed out will most certainly help.
And hi to you to  ;)



And I made this yesterday, it looks terrible :P , i never was good at backview sprites, but that why I'm here ;)


EDIT:

older version

newer version

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Pixel Art / Re: my first lizard with halberd
« on: January 09, 2007, 01:56:51 pm »
maby you should make spikes on the tail(the part that seems as an @$$)
and/or put it some to the left and do uhh..(hard to explain):

(oh my drawing looks so good :P)


also some things are kind of strange that need some attention(I don't say you have to change it, I've just marked some things that looked weird to me):

-the knee, maby you should put it a bit higher

-The pants, it looks like a skirt now.

-the line under the belt, it looks weird

-the finger(with the red circle round it) maby you should put it some to the right

-you should also check the other things out I redlined


 :y: It looks good so far, keep up the good work


Edit:
something i happend to notice later, the left foot, it only has 3 toes, you should make 1 extra...or at least a part of the nail

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Pixel Art / Re: (WIP) tactics character(s)
« on: January 07, 2007, 03:46:26 pm »


2 newer versions,the first only has better AA. The 2nd has a moving upper body.
I don't really like the 2nd version but maby there should be something changed with it

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Pixel Art / Re: (WIP) tactics character(s)
« on: January 07, 2007, 02:42:51 pm »
Update:
(newer version)
(older version)
Tried to make the shoulders move more realistic, I hope it worked.

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Pixel Art / Re: (WIP) tactics character(s)
« on: January 07, 2007, 12:46:57 pm »


(the 2 images on top are the new sprites, the image to the bottomleft is etivores sprite and the image to the bottom right is my old sprite)

Thanks for your help entivore :) your 'bounce' in the animation looks much better.
I edited 1 frame of your animation and now the animation looks pretty good IMO, I made a change at the left leg(so it doent look like it just slides).
Ill try to work on the back shoulders now.

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Pixel Art / (WIP) tactics character(s)
« on: January 06, 2007, 11:37:57 am »
Hello,

You might remember this topic from pixeljoint, I got a lot of help there but i still could use some more so also I made a topic on this forum.
 
I'm currently working on a srpg and my part of the game is spriting the characters (I didn't make the designs).
The project I was working on has stopped, the project leader isn't responding to my e-mails anymore. But I don't feel like stopping with working on these sprites, I'm learning a lot from these and I might start my own project. And if I dont, this is a nice piece for in my portfolio ;).
I got a lot of help from the pixeljoint forums and I also got help from a friend. This is the progress my sprite has made:
But to see better progress you should scroll down.





Whole new design

The current verions:

(Ill make it transparant later)
As you can see there are some points that need improvement:

-The design of the blue suit.

-If you think one of the sprites needs improvement on something else, please let me know.

Help is very apreciated. ;)

Thanks in advance!

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[Edit] I edited all your posts and removed the URL tags linking to imageshack.us.
Here in pixelation, we use a click based zoom scrip, and having the images linked will just result on pages popping up to those trying to zoom for giving some C&C or looking close at your sprites.
Please, next time don't forget to remove them (or simply select the image's url alone, and use the img tags). - Panda


Thanks Panda :)

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