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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Scroller Game Art Production | C64 colors
« on: May 07, 2009, 12:05:37 pm »
I don't think the character in 7 is working at the moment.
He's not readable as a guy in a space suit - look more like a cute space rocket.
I think you need to do more to make the arms and legs visible. Also I think you need to reassess the shading on the space man - its far too uniform and uninteresting - not conveying form particularly well.
Maybe try to up the exposure on him. A side effect of the jet stream - a super bright light source?
He's not readable as a guy in a space suit - look more like a cute space rocket.
I think you need to do more to make the arms and legs visible. Also I think you need to reassess the shading on the space man - its far too uniform and uninteresting - not conveying form particularly well.
Maybe try to up the exposure on him. A side effect of the jet stream - a super bright light source?