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that arch in her back still seems really unnatural. it goes completely horizontal, then almost straight vertical. I find it implausible given the position of her pelvis.Totally. Why is her finger the only thing touching her head? It should be the whole hand. And that back looks really unnatural.
I know i'm not one to talk when it comes to things like this, but the first thing that pops out at me is that there is a ton of banding and in general pillow shading.
Epicly lame was a mistake on my part. I'm just saying it needs improvement.BIGGER! Must be bigger! Otherwise no one will bother to help you cause it is so epicy lame and there is no room for changing it
What the hell dude, you've got less than 10 posts and you're telling people that their pixel art is 'epicly lame'? Get out of here! Or shape up, seriously.
TNTuser, I think it works pretty well as it is, although you can definitely improve it. Do you have any palette restrictions or such? Do you have any background art for the game it's gonna be in? Or just a general color feel, all that would help.
This is a critique forum. You get critique and you put it to use and you get better. You don't have to like the edits you're getting, but please appreciate them.I DO appreciate them, sorry if it didn't seem like it.
Besides the JPEG issue (seriously, smart people are telling you it's a problem, why argue?) I didn't know that he had a mustache. I thought the mustache was his mouth and the mouth was an underline/underlip part of the mouth to make it look like he was frowning and grunting in horror."Smart people are telling you it,s a problem, why argue?" Thats like saying "Your friend your stupid, why argue?" I'm just expressing my opinion, just cause some "Smart Person" tells you something doesn't mean you have to listen.
Also, jpg compression adds colours. The gif/png one has 111 colours (which is a needlessly huge amount and makes me think your smiley was shrank down from a bigger version), while the jpg one has over 200 colours.It was not shrunken down, it is supposed to be gradient, I don't get what your guys problem is with so many colors... And I came here to C AND C (Critique and Comments) not just critique, so please tell me how I can fix the mustache
I also agree that the mustache thing is not at all obvious. I read it like infinitegames.