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Pixel Art / Re: <WIP>Platformer mock up
« on: May 23, 2010, 10:51:09 pm »
the checkerboard bg is very disturbing....  u should work on ur colors, they look kinda wased out, add more contrast and stuff.... the grass and dirt is very repetitive, add some variation
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Pixel Art / Re: Dithering-ing
« on: May 23, 2010, 10:17:53 pm »
i think u need more contrast to make it look rounder....and making things stick/pop out can be done with shading....

also... i think ur attempt of dithering here is pointless, for example the highlight on the column uses two unique greys in a checkerboard pattern, why not just take only one 'inbetween' grey instead?... also dithering is only needed if u have a rly limited palette to work with... actually ur using 57 (!) colors here (no idea how that could have happened Oo) so i think u could pretty much go without any dithering at all

Pixel Art / Re: Characters don't fit into environment!
« on: May 19, 2010, 11:48:26 pm »
u definitely have to work on ur palette.... maybe add black outlines to the sprites.... also shadows help to make them stand out more

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Moving Mountains
« on: May 19, 2010, 08:48:57 pm »
first off i think u should go smaller ... maybe half...
just start blocking out basic sapes and basic shading, then , with  something to hold onto, ur imagination will do the rest

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Pixel Art / Re: Some new stuff
« on: May 19, 2010, 08:28:47 pm »
heres another example for a girlish look.....

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