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Pixel Art / Re: WWII Pin Up Girl
« on: July 23, 2017, 07:17:47 pm »
this is a super quick analysis, but its immediately obvious that proportions and angles are off.

The red lines are there to emphasis certain angles that are off. The blue lines are to show proportion. The blue lines on each image are about the same length, mainly to show your hips are too narrow. The torso is too long and straight. I think you should disregard detail and shading until you can block in the drawing more accurately. Focus just on the proportions, and the gesture, just using solid areas of color. This way you don't waste time detailing things you'll need to end up fixing later.

The red lines are there to emphasis certain angles that are off. The blue lines are to show proportion. The blue lines on each image are about the same length, mainly to show your hips are too narrow. The torso is too long and straight. I think you should disregard detail and shading until you can block in the drawing more accurately. Focus just on the proportions, and the gesture, just using solid areas of color. This way you don't waste time detailing things you'll need to end up fixing later.