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Pixel Art / Re: D~Dawg's pixels
« on: August 12, 2009, 05:30:49 pm »

look at these two side by side. see how fucbillgates version looks round? when you only highlight and shade the edges of the frog it looks flat like a disk. try to think about volumes when you're shading. also, your palette also doesn't have enough contrast between colors, they're blending together.

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Pixel Art / Re: Some sort of sword
« on: August 11, 2009, 08:59:59 am »
here's an edit showing how to make the hilt look round. i kinda got carried away making the edit and also reduced the color count a little.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] FLAG
« on: August 11, 2009, 03:13:15 am »
when i said you had the materials backwards i meant that the flag looked like metal and the pole looked more like cloth. in your new version the stars are really sporadic. try looking at some reference to see how they're placed.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] FLAG
« on: August 10, 2009, 05:42:05 pm »
in your latest edit you've got the materials backwards. the flag has a lot of contrast and the pole doesn't have enough. take another look at my edit and compare it to yours. you should also try to establish a light source. the light is hitting the pole on the left but it doesn't look that way on the flag.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] FLAG
« on: August 07, 2009, 12:06:03 am »
here's a quick edit i made with the correct specs.

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Pixel Art / Re: Jake Bonfire crit discussion
« on: June 17, 2009, 10:57:51 pm »
here's a little update i made for fun.



your newest update looks better but i think you're still using too many colors. you need to work on simplifying the shading and unifying the palette.

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