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Pixel Art / Re: Iso walk animation
« on: July 21, 2011, 02:52:05 pm »
Please don't rotate the head. It almost never looks right, and it usually makes the piece look a lot worse imo.

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Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Creature - Sidescroller
« on: June 11, 2011, 11:54:36 pm »
I think the way to make him look more balanced would be to shrink the head. The body would not be able to support the head at all at the moment. The best iteration, in my opinion, was "big body small head shrunk" if it were just cleaned up a bit.

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Pixel Art / Re: Some animations
« on: April 28, 2010, 06:07:38 pm »
The legs appear to not bend. The arms may be too exaggerated.
For every step, he looks to the viewer instead of facing forward.
I really like the style and want to like the walk animation, but it is flawed.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Simple platformer
« on: April 06, 2010, 05:53:27 pm »
I don't think the head should move. Why would it? I've seen many walk cycles have the same problem; I guess everyone is copying each other's mistakes because they certainly didn't get it from how people actually walk.

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Pixel Art / Re: Galactic Garden
« on: April 06, 2010, 12:08:36 am »
I think that dithering on the shaded part of the window right behind his head sticks out too much like it's unnecessary.

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General Discussion / Re: Official Off-Topic Thread
« on: March 28, 2010, 01:22:07 pm »
Quote
John K rants all day about animation but is a poor animator himself,
Okay, now you're just a troll.

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Pixel Art / Re: [Slight WIP] Face
« on: September 13, 2009, 12:33:42 am »
I think you are concentrating too much on polishing it without getting the forms down first. Also, all the colors make it seem kinda blurred. I think the eye should be bigger, the nose is pretty undefined, and the mouth is too big.
I tried to make an edit. I didn't use a reference so it's basically my perception of what a face should look like versus yours, and it's prety crap. But, be that as it may, maybe you can get something from it.

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Pixel Art / Re: Crazy Cat [WIP]
« on: August 03, 2009, 04:57:54 pm »
It does not seem to be very readable as a cat; it looks like a demon or somehting. Maybe giving it a nose or whiskers would help it look like a cat.
I made an edit:

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Serpent of sorts...
« on: July 03, 2009, 02:47:56 am »
For scale try little splotches of colour.

I try to make it look less boring.
I am also beginner so take with grain of salt.

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Pixel Art / Re: Afghani Girl
« on: December 30, 2008, 03:49:22 pm »
I made an edit to try to capture likeness more.



I made her face less long and wide and tried to get her features more like the reference.

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