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Pixel Art / Re: Covered Wagon (C+C)
« on: January 27, 2016, 08:45:33 pm »
Appreciate the help ErekT, ill work on the banding issue. Overall though I'm happy with the result.   
jams0988, you assumed right, its supposed to be situated in a dark forest type area but the advice on background consideration is still noted. Hadn't really thought about it honestly so thanks!  :)

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Pixel Art / Re: Covered Wagon (C+C)
« on: January 25, 2016, 03:25:39 pm »
ErekT, thanks for the help. I realize now that contrast is a concept I'm not entirely familiar with but I went ahead and tried reducing the color count and using different hues to increase the overall readability. I also really like the shading you did on the wheels and canvas, so I decided to incorporate it myself (it's really such an obvious and simple improvement that I'm a little embarrassed for entirely forgetting to do it myself :-[)
Anyway what do guys think so far?

   

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Pixel Art / Covered Wagon (C+C)
« on: January 18, 2016, 07:06:12 pm »
Hey there, just wanted some criticism on this covered wagon I've been working on. Something about it seems a bit off to me, and I only just recently started dabbling in pixel art so I can't quite pin down exactly what's wrong. Maybe the wheels? ??? Anyways any advice is appreciated




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Pixel Art / Re: (C+C) Tree, Background, and General Advice
« on: January 05, 2016, 04:27:08 am »
Hey Seefore thanks for the advice!
I was a bit swamped with the holidays but still somehow managed to get some work done :lol: I decided to change the hue of the tree bark, added some branches and varied the shading lines. I also also added some background foliage and tried incorporating some blue shifting. 



I'm rather proud of the results so far but I would appreciate any more advice or criticisms.   

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Pixel Art / (C+C) Tree, Background, and General Advice
« on: December 29, 2015, 01:25:22 am »
Hello, everyone! First time poster and complete new comer to pixel art here. I've been prowling the forums for a little while now and really like the community so i figured I'd join in, contribute and ask for some constructive criticism. Anyways here's the first project I've worked on past character sketches.   



Its pretty simple but I wanted to work on something more straightforward to hone my skills. Main things i feel i need the most help on here though are the trees and background composition. I initially had the trunks of the trees alone as background but figured it didn't look interesting enough so I added some greenery. In any case general advice on basic techniques are also welcome :)

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