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Pixel Art / Re: Scavengers in Sillhoutte - WIP
« on: January 29, 2013, 05:47:10 am »
I'm a bit confused, do you want to make the window a bit smoother? If so why not use the colour you've already used on the side of the building?
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Pixel Art / Re: Wizard
« on: January 27, 2013, 11:13:10 am »
good work on shadowing underneath the hat, however not sure why the lower quarter of his hair is in shadow.
perhaps reduce how much of the sunglasses you can see. sunglasses point straight ahead on a person and you would only see a small portion of the lens from a side on view
perhaps reduce how much of the sunglasses you can see. sunglasses point straight ahead on a person and you would only see a small portion of the lens from a side on view
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Pixel Art / Re: Scavengers in Sillhoutte - WIP
« on: January 27, 2013, 11:04:44 am »
agreed, the shift in hue and saturation draws the attention to the front because it is the richest in colour.
the details on the buildings make a huge difference. what I thought was a shaft of light is now two buildings.
great touch with the lights, it wouldn't be a perfect white when it hits the people, nor would it be a perfect white coming out, trying shifting it towards a cool or warm colour (depending on the age of the car)
*I had a go tweaking the lights around and I couldn't find any colours that worked well, still a thought though*
added in a few things, window details, gaps between buildings, tubing to the neon lights (maybe have one of the glow?)
the details on the buildings make a huge difference. what I thought was a shaft of light is now two buildings.
great touch with the lights, it wouldn't be a perfect white when it hits the people, nor would it be a perfect white coming out, trying shifting it towards a cool or warm colour (depending on the age of the car)
*I had a go tweaking the lights around and I couldn't find any colours that worked well, still a thought though*
added in a few things, window details, gaps between buildings, tubing to the neon lights (maybe have one of the glow?)
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] RPG-like mockup
« on: January 27, 2013, 01:00:13 am »
the only problems per say I can find in this are perhaps the water is a bit dull, the tree a bit cubed and the path just stops (although you probably haven't finished the tileset)
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Pixel Art / Re: Scavengers in Sillhoutte - WIP
« on: January 27, 2013, 12:56:23 am »
I think some scenery in the background is what would make this piece really come alive. limbo for references has the nice silhouetted backdrops https://www.vegard.net/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/Limbo-2011-08-13-00-03-48-25.jpg
this looks like a mountainous area barren place, so have the backdrop resemble that
this looks like a mountainous area barren place, so have the backdrop resemble that
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Pine Tree
« on: January 24, 2013, 05:11:30 am »
huge improvement from your first tree, try using some more of that lighter colour to show the sun shining on the outer leaves (make sure you pick a direction it is coming from)
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] sidescroller sprite [C+C]
« on: January 24, 2013, 01:00:14 am »
good to see you're still going at it, your first guy looks much better now. might I suggest that you pull his hat down a bit to make it more pointed?
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Fantasy isometric tileset
« on: January 23, 2013, 05:55:30 am »
on top of what bloom stated, some of your characters need more contrast between their skin and their clothing. perhaps just increasing the saturation on the skin colour might help.
your golem could be more jagged like a rock, at the moment he is very flat and smooth
your golem could be more jagged like a rock, at the moment he is very flat and smooth
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Pixel Art / Re: New to pixel art/art and need help to understand banding
« on: January 22, 2013, 12:04:45 am »
instead of using black lines all through her hair, you should use darker and lighter blues to shadow and highlight her hair.
*bottom picture http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs8/i/2005/298/c/c/Pixel_Art_Hair_Tutorial_by_BloodyBlackRoses.jpg
the gun could use some improvement as well. guns aren't a gradient of one colour to another, they are made up of lots of individual pieces: primarily the barrel, slider and grip.
*bottom picture http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs8/i/2005/298/c/c/Pixel_Art_Hair_Tutorial_by_BloodyBlackRoses.jpg
the gun could use some improvement as well. guns aren't a gradient of one colour to another, they are made up of lots of individual pieces: primarily the barrel, slider and grip.
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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Mega-Vas
« on: January 20, 2013, 07:22:53 am »
- reduced banding
- reduced colour count
- changed sand colours slightly
next step, more work on sand and redoing the clouds
- reduced colour count
- changed sand colours slightly
next step, more work on sand and redoing the clouds