I think you have a lot of tallent, but I think your outlines look a little sloppy.

The shading looks complex in some areas, then very simple in others.  One suggestion might be not to use black for the entire outline.   

For example, you can try using dark-blue around the dress.

thanks a lot, maybe ill try a lil aa

regarding jpeg as an artists i know bitmap is better-and thats what i saved it in, however ...PHOTOBUXKET aka photo-crush-it converted it