I guess it's ok, try some animations, like the orb with diferent intensity, like a candle; depending on how you do it, it can improves the junky feeling

hmmm, those eyes...



what about now?

P.D.: By this moment I can only think that she haves an scar on his torso, am I wrong?

I try to kill most of your beautifull softy colors to enable contrast power, keeping the most your palette. Also, what about that black powerfull line outside? Check the one without it and tell me.

    Tell us something more about your proyect, something like a shoot 'em up can be... anything. I myself don't know what I'm looking at, is it the main ship of the game? If it is, it seems interesting to make a very minimalist protagonist for this genre, but it can be polished. Remember that memorable characters aren't just good looking, they are interesting to watch and follow throught their mission.

    I don't know if is this monitor, but the screw-like dots you are using are almost invisible, try more contrast, if you want to keep them, as they give a coarse-scrap looking. Of course I  just keep on writting without knowledge, but to get a good idea of futuristic minimalism, think about something like, mmm, Eva, fron Wall-e, she is clean, and soft, and have smooth shadows... try making some shading to give it a round effect (think about a cilinder), and as the action (proton cannons emitions and things like that) probably occurs up in the screen, it probably would be better to draw the shadows in the lower part, maybe giving a more dramatic looking.

    Don't forget contrast (don't excess either)! If you try to draw those shadows, you probably want to make that darker area in the middle-low part a bit more brighter.

    Also, is there some limitation in the color palette?