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Pixel Art / Gypsy Forest...again
« on: March 03, 2013, 03:50:11 pm »
Hi guys,
For any of you that have been around a while, you may remember a long time ago that I attempted to make a forest backdrop for an RPG battle scene. The effort ended up turning into a right fiasco. I got stuck with it to the point that I gave up.
http://www.wayofthepixel.net/index.php?topic=11912.msg121394#msg121394
Since then, after a second attempt where the file corrupted, I've now gone for a 3rd iteration and here's what I've come up with.

Updated:

I'm much happier with this effort. I'm happy enough with it as it is, but I thought I'd show it here before calling time on it as a piece of work. Now I'm looking for your verdict on whether it's good or could do with some work help to take it the next level because, once again, I've hit a brick wall.
- I've re-jigged the frog man since the original version, giving him a changed (and probably more anatomically correct) pose and a darker outline, to help make him a focus of the piece. Considering this is an RPG battle, I didn't want the character to blend seamlessly into the background. What you guys think about this compared to how the hero looks in the scene?
- Do you find the whole scene too dark and recommend I increase the contrast in the shades?
- Any other recommendations?
I'm open to design changes, palette changes etc. Perhaps not anything as drastic as a complete redesign though.
Help is most appreciated
Thanks
Inq
For any of you that have been around a while, you may remember a long time ago that I attempted to make a forest backdrop for an RPG battle scene. The effort ended up turning into a right fiasco. I got stuck with it to the point that I gave up.
http://www.wayofthepixel.net/index.php?topic=11912.msg121394#msg121394
Since then, after a second attempt where the file corrupted, I've now gone for a 3rd iteration and here's what I've come up with.

Updated:

I'm much happier with this effort. I'm happy enough with it as it is, but I thought I'd show it here before calling time on it as a piece of work. Now I'm looking for your verdict on whether it's good or could do with some work help to take it the next level because, once again, I've hit a brick wall.
- I've re-jigged the frog man since the original version, giving him a changed (and probably more anatomically correct) pose and a darker outline, to help make him a focus of the piece. Considering this is an RPG battle, I didn't want the character to blend seamlessly into the background. What you guys think about this compared to how the hero looks in the scene?
- Do you find the whole scene too dark and recommend I increase the contrast in the shades?
- Any other recommendations?
I'm open to design changes, palette changes etc. Perhaps not anything as drastic as a complete redesign though.

Help is most appreciated
Thanks
Inq